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I thought that this was a very interesting story! It\'s my first one with the charaters\' roles reversed, and I would LOVE to find out what happenes! ONEGAI!!! Finish the story!

PIKACHU GODDESS
(o\';\'o)

XD I like this fic. A lot of the time, I dislike role-reversals >.< Somethime\'s they\'re just plain annoying. I like this one though XD Its sexy AND funny XDDD and... ahahahah to Sakano >.> <.< He deserves to be cheated on. WAHAHAHA.

What else did I want to say? Hmm *THINKS* That was great. Keep up the good work :D

Love, Buyo

Wait just a second, back up a bit, is Eiri just talking to himself or is he a schizo or something? That was really odd.. anyway, your having them live together, that was clever! Of course my guess is that Eiri will fall in love with him, and will want Shuichi to stay, or he will fall in love with him, not say anything, let Shu get his own appartment, wallow in his own misery for a time before begging Shuichi to come back to him, something along those lines, or it could be something completely different and Eiri could turn out to be insane! Anyhoo, love the angst, and you need to find something that will get you out of writers block, I find just drawing random things and not even thinking about anything in particular and letting my mind wander helps... Can\'t wait for the next chapter, but of course I have to, keep up the good work^__^!!!

Still a jerk. *smirks* Some things never change. I\'m talking about Eiri that is. ^^ Anyway, great fanfic so far so update soon.

hello! i love your story. and this is the first of this plot i\'ve seen. but if you want a original plot, try this: hiro is the novelist and k-chan is the rising singer. in this world, shuichi and yuki are together. yuki is the guitar player and shuichi is the keyboard player. all the other bands are still there. and the maneger is fujisaki (he\'s an intern plus a little older). and sakano has more of a backbone. other then that, everyone\'s in character. i think this would be good and if this been done before, oh well. i guess this is a request for any authors out there. i\'m not good at writing stories but i get pretty good ideas (like this one).

ideas: more lemmon!
oh, no. ignore that
more sex!

I don\'t think a story should be \'flamed\' unless the plot sucks, you can\'t read it all to well, etc. I don\'t fuss over small unimportant details for as long as you get the point across in a comprehensible way, then I\'m fine with it. I really enjoy this story, and can\'t really think of anything at the moment as to where the plot should go, but I could think about it, for I have the rest of the week off and will most definitely be bored. I thought it was really sad with Shuichi being all depressed, actually, if you weren\'t thinking about it before, you could put in a \'flashback\' of what had happened between Tohma and Shuichi and then maybe have Tohma fall in love with Eiri or something, and Eiri want Shuichi, then have a brawl break out, but I dont really know and I can\'t wait for the next chapter to come out, keep up the good work! ^__^

you want feedback...how about shuichi-yuki lemons....hahahhaha

ohhh that is soooo sad that he used shuichi...the kid is adorable....how could anyone do that...

That was an awesome chapter, and I can\'t wait to see what happens next. The characters are all perfectly in character (in my opinion, atleast), and I love your plot. >_> <_< I love updates! *gives cookies*