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for Private Dancer

by buenagirl

person Kamryn
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was very good. I love Youji x Aya fics so I'm glad a ran across this. I hope you do another story with these two. Perhaps a follow up to this one (hint). Anyway, lots of luck with your future fics.
person Selena
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ABSOLUTLY LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!
person Ryo
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful. I loved this story, and even cried a bit in a few chapters. I loved your writing style. Very nice indeed. Keep up the good work!
person Aura4
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! I have this big stupid grin on my face right now. Im biting my lip to hold some of it back. I always imagined that Aya had a bit of a kinky streak in him. Naughty fun for everyone. ^_^
person Eiri Yamata
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! it\'s the cutest, and i admit, the pairing(s) with ken threw me off..... ^_^ though, now i think that i enjoy ken\'s little lolita complex.... two are better than one! lolz anyways, i\'ll let you go! oh and before i go here! **hands boxes of strawberry pocky** congradulations on creating such a great ficcy!!
hugs for you!!
Eiri
person Caroline
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just LOVe your story!!!!! I \"discovered\" it about one hour ago and I couldn\'t stop reading It\'s funny, angsty, romantic and just everything a good story needs!!!!
Your fan
Caroline
person Crimson Blade
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(end of ch.6) Please excuse my language but....OH SHIT!! Not Bradly too!!
person Crimson Blade
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(end of ch. 5) This is scary....I had to stop right in the middle of the Yohji/Aya scean and go to bed last night, and all I could think about today at school was going home and reading more Yohji/Aya goodness....ths is begining to become unhealthy....

*sniff* Bad Shu, bad! I don\'t think I\'ve ever hated Shuldig so much in all the fiction I\'ve ever read (I think)....it\'s just that he\'s so evil and mean and so much like those selfish rich prick-like pigs that we have in real life....*blink* I think I know why I hate him all of a sudden....^^\'
person crimson blade
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(only at ch. 2)*GASP* This is so great!! I like the fact that you posted your entire story in one sitting, though I would have posted a chapter every couple of days in stead, more chances for reveiws! ^_~ This is a great idea, I like how you did the characters, and I love the fact that it\'s not only origional, but just flat out good!

*makes poor attempt at promoting her story* Read Numb, it\'s a goooooooood story! Read Numb, I wrote it and it\'s gooooooooood! *kills birds with singing* *blinki* oops....^^^
person Kikvws
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww...this was really, really sweet. You did a great job with this ficcie, very nice plotline. I liked that there was no black and white differentiation of \'bad guys\'. The only downside to the fic were numerous grammatical and spelling errors, but it still warrants a five star rating in my opinion! Great job, hope to see more ficcies from you in the future!

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