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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe Seph, I have to say that was an interesting read. *shaking head* I\'ll never see stuffed rabbits the same way ROTFL :P
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Seriously though, that was a rather well crafted fic, one that had my eyes wide as saucers but glued. *LOL* It was an interesting look into the mind of Ni. And a very different look or rather POV, very dark and eerie but still rather good in my opinion. I hope that you write more Saiyuki. :) Oh and don\'t mind me much, I\'m quite obsessed with Hakkai X Gojyo but I love reading anything that is well put together and catches my eyes. *sigh* I do hope someday to write as well as you and some of the other authors I\'ve read. :) In the meantime......*begging teary chibi eyes* More stories? Puh-weeeaaase? *with a chocolate and cherry coated Ni and rabbit on top?* :P
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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good show Seph!
I really like how well you objectified the victim. You didn’t want the reader to sympathize with her and you conveyed that VERY well. I found this disturbing and by the end of it something perverse inside of me wanted to see her die. I need help.
There aren’t enough Nii fics out there and I know you well enough to know that you can really bring him home. Good show.
Your used of verbiage was great. You had the right mix of sensuality and coldness. You write such a good bad guy that at times I wonder about you.
Keep up the good work,
Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip*
You just gave me the courage to post my dark lemon fic. The one two betas have warned me not to post. Snarl.
I really like how well you objectified the victim. You didn’t want the reader to sympathize with her and you conveyed that VERY well. I found this disturbing and by the end of it something perverse inside of me wanted to see her die. I need help.
There aren’t enough Nii fics out there and I know you well enough to know that you can really bring him home. Good show.
Your used of verbiage was great. You had the right mix of sensuality and coldness. You write such a good bad guy that at times I wonder about you.
Keep up the good work,
Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip*
You just gave me the courage to post my dark lemon fic. The one two betas have warned me not to post. Snarl.