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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fine over all, I suppose. Too many usages of baka. Lots of grammatical and spelling errors.
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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a really good story.You should write more.I think you should keep the story short though.You even spell better than I do.
You have a great imagination.You should write other stories.^_^
You have a great imagination.You should write other stories.^_^
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was too great. I think I may take up smoking after this... kidding. I hope that there is a second chapter to this little Lemon for the actual non-dream lemon, tee hee ^__^
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome, awesome, awesome! I loved that fanfiction! Wow! What a way with kinkiness!!!
That was just simply amazing! MORE PLEEEEEEEZZZZZEEE!!!!!
That was just simply amazing! MORE PLEEEEEEEZZZZZEEE!!!!!
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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know, i liked it a lot but, uh, your A/N was a little scary adn defensive...calm down! this is aff.net, no one\'s going to flame you for content. perhaps for execution but not content!
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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Muahaha!! I love it! Brilliant idea! 2nd chapter? Please!!!!