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by GuiltyRed

person ro_buddi
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I will honestly say this is one of the best WK series FF i\'ve read to date. And from such an interesting vantage point! The \'bad\' guys! I spent my entire spring break reading it ALL. ALLLLL. I love all the charatcer development, Farf in particular (he\'s rather my favorite). I enjoyed ever single bloomin\' chapter, and can\'t wait for more. Its like, whooooa. Massive kudos and kudas for you, missy/(mista\'?)
Ro
person Sexxi Twisted Angel
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...but...but...what comes next? Evil cliffhanger...this is such a captivating story I love it. :D Aww...poor Schu...poor Brad...wonder what they did to him...*huggles Braddie-chan*. OOhhh...can\'t wait for the update....Brad is scared that Schu will leave him...Oracle has feelings...how cute.
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. and a ::sighs:: For reasons there\'s no point in explaining, this one really got me where I live somehow (no worries, I don\'t mean the abuse aspect). Thanks for it.
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another riveting chapter and although I have not reviewed lately I have kept reading. It sounds like things might be coming to a head soon and I hope Schwarz makes it out intact. You have turned them from merely a team of bad guys to a group of men with emotions and problems. Reading about this is what makes it all so facinating. A Schu and Yohji moment...sigh. Nicely written and very in character. Keep up the fantastic job! Your loyal fan
Amy
person jmi
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is, hands down, one of the best Schwarz fics I have ever read. I look every couple of days to see if there is a new chapter. Please keep up the excellent work!
person Sexxi Twisted Angel
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...cliff-hanger...how evil...we don\'t even get to see why Schu is going to Tokyo. Possibly to ask Yohji about Kritiker...possibly to screw Yohji senseless...or possibly an ulterior motive. One has to wonder why Brad got his sight back...is it because they left the country...or is it because of the drugs...or something else...*shrugs*. Update soon...and stop my curiosity for a few minutes...till next time.
person purkeldragongoddess
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh god I can\'t believe I haven\'t reviewed this yet!

Honestly this is one of the only reasons I come to AFF everyday, to see if you\'ve updated. This story keeps dragging me along, and I love it! Excellent plot, the characterizations are perfect--all in all a brilliant work.
person Sexxi Twisted Angel (Reviewed at the end of chapter 51)
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooohh....poor Brad. I hope him staying permenantly blind won\'t happen, and I eventually hope that all of them are cured...and that Farf doesn\'t go after WeiB. This is a great plot so far, and the suspense level is high which is very good. Well I hope you update soon. Goodbye.
person avid reader
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"Farf is communing with the air conditioner,\" LOL!! I really love this image from the last chapter. Since I haven\'t read the manga (surely there is one?), and the anime (with one of the worst English dubs I\'ve ever heard) barely touched Farf at all, I never warmed up to this character much, but you\'ve really brought him to life for me. I\'m growing a bit fond o\' the bairn... :D Top marks all round for the story so far - writing, imagery, humor, characterisation, plotting, pace, drama.... I am seriously impressed. Looking forward to more of this and your other stories!
person aubrey plummer
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the best Schwarz fanfiction I have ever read! Its has a wonderful, exciting plot and my favorite pairing, Brad and Schuldig! And I would like to thank the author for writing little footnotes at the end of each chapter; they give the story a deeper meaning. Please keep writing more chapters! I\'m dying waiting for the next chapter!

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