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by Kaie

person shuiede
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sniff, sniff* goodness! I love reading your fics. Truthfully, I never anticipated much to read for the Lemon chapter. Reading the interplay of their dazzled emotions and how they had reacted to the given situation(especially Amon's) had me hooked up so much. For me, there's no need to have the lemon to back up for the readers to anticipate the story. The scene between Amon and Robin seeing each other for the first time after 5 years, Amon's rage and burst guilt, the emotions they had felt as they held each other's hand, oh...and the brief kiss Robin gave to Amon at the hospital just to make him relax, surrendering his guard and guilt....oh dear.....*sniff,sniff* they are simple actions yet produce so much great effect.

create more fics, dear. I very much envy of the style of your writing. You have the gift. With lemons or not, spread it. :D

schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful. It was worth the waiting between chapters. May I say perfect...
person SMARTY
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SEQUEL PLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE.:p MORE MORE MORE MORE. HAHAHAHAHA
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Can you make a sequel please?
person Buritani
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really kawaii, the lemon was excellent, not too graphic and extremely sweet and it completed an amazing fanfiction. I loved this and I think you are an amazing writer.
keep it up!!
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Sparky16
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That last chapter was PERFECT! I don\'t think it needed any more details. It was perfect. A sequal? Oooo! sparky would LOVE that! The story was sad and beautiful. A wonderful read! thank you for seeing it all the way though. I give this story a 10/10
person Sparky16
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay i\'ve only been waiting FOREVER for this!!!! Good to see everything turned out for the better! so uh, when are you going to update? or are we going to have to wait months for that one too *eyes*

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!

Don\'t make me beg!
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person PunkeeMonkee
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is SO great, but you have a lot of pauses between your chapters(*sob*). Please write more; I really enjoy your story so far!

P.S. Robin Sena rules.

PUNKEEMONKEE

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