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by Kaie

person sexyharuka
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww..... that was soo good!!!!!! I absolutely LOVED it!! Please don\'t take too long with the lemon!!!!

Once again, great!
person Anon
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm I would suggest writing too your own tastes what ever they might be. I vote graphic lemon for what it\'s worth.
person Buritani
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know about everyone else, but I love AmonRobin, and I would really like to read a sweet, cute lemon instead of an overly graphic one
person Buritani
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, I\'ve just read some of the other reviews, and I agree, something inbetween would be good, but pleas, not overly graphic
person Megan Consoer
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person mel
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your fic, i hope you keep updateing. And as for your question about the lemon, i think you should do something in between. Start out with all the love in the world then go into an aggressive need. well that\'s what i would like anyway.
person bubbles
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
something in btwn! can u email me when there\'s an update?
person haruka
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey!! great story, thanks for coming back

I\'d like anything that was living and passionate in the lemon PLEASE!!

person sexyharuka
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For your lemon question, could you do something in between? I agree that it should start off with immense love and then, as they catch up in each others lives, things really heat up!! Just an idea!
person Buritani
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! this is really good! maybe, could you make the lemon more sweet and cute than graphic? I\'m really interested in seeing what happens next

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