rate_review Reviews

Very interesting story. I really like it. Kaoru is a blast with her moods and I love Kenshin. ^_^ please update this fic soon if you can, if not I still will watch for it. Really, cool fic! Laters!

I like the story so far. It's interesting how similar the characters are to the original yet their roles are slightly different. Interesting role Koshijiro has with Shishio. Should make for an interesting conflict for Kenshin and Kaoru. Hope you update sometime in the near future. Ja ne!

Please update soon, I really liuke this story!

I Really like your story and the fact that you use the characters differently. Look foward to reading more, good luck with the next chapter.

it's an amazing story so far! it's as if i wasn't in my chair in front of my computer anymore, the people:their interactions, their actions; the world, the buildings cities towns, forest etc. were given just enough description for my imagination to take me there.

i am going to be reading this again and again till you finally complete it, thank you for the great ride!
ginny

You know, you should put this story up on normal Fanfiction.Net, because this so far is PG at best, and not NC-17 or anything. But that aside, this is a pretty good AU story and whatnot. update soon.:P


**PeachSweetS**

(eh... maybe ignore my previous review, because I prolly sounded idiotic.) But still, you should post this story on normal FF.Net, because tis really isn't even R-rated at best. It kinna falls into T or M, in my opinion. This story is good, and would prolly be easily overlooked by the majority of pervs that are really just here to read erotic PWP's and whatnot, when this story is well thought out and lovey-dovey-ish. well that's just my opinion. ^_^;;


later,

**PeachSweetS**

ohhh this is sooo much fun. poor kaoru. one attack after another. at least she has kenshin to protect her. i loook forward to reading the next chapter and find out the outcome of kaoru and yahiko\'s battle.

Interesting story. I remember reading the first chapter a while ago, but this is the first time I read the story all the way through. It is pretty good. I\'m not one for Kaoru being a damsil in distress, even if she is a strong one, but it\'s still fun to see Kenshin be the hero. Writer\'s block can be a bitch. I was suffering from a case myself, now I can\'t stop writing. Oh, the trials of a novice writer :) Hope to see an update soon.

Sosoru

ahh simply wonderful. This story brings back the warm memories of that classic eromanga \'Femme Kabuki\' which you most certainly must have read too n.n It\'s one of my fave(as far as eromanga goes), because of it\'s fun story and wealth of historical references.
My one question is why exactly is Kaoru using a sakatabou(sp?), I was under the impression that they are really uncommon(as in Kenshin owns one of the only ones evar[that and they don\'t really exist}). It seems more likely she would just be using a dull or unsharpend sword rather than the complicated to forge reversed blade sword.
But I digress, I find this story to very very entertaining, and I hope you get to that eventual updating. I like that you say that, \"eventual\". My moto for fanfiction has always been \"make no promises\", you never know when circumstances will keep you from writing. Anyway, feel free to email me and pick my brain if you need help getting those juices flowing.