rate_review Reviews

YES! That was fantastic. That was hot. Incredible. Whatelse can I say. I love how you\'re building the whole thing up too. Can\'t wait for the next part. (Hope your computer is better, hee he) Anyway, as I\'ve said before, there just aren\'t enough S-Cred stories out there. Need more!

Oh, I was so excited when I saw there was an update, and that lemon was absolutely 100% worth the long wait! Your lemon writing is simply a pleasure to read. There\'s no times where I am ever confused as to what exactly is going on, or lost in a scene. You\'ve got a great style, love the descriptions and dialogue!

I look forward to your next chapter, and I can\'t wait till Kazuma finally takes Ryuhou <3

I\'m happy to hear you\'re alive and kickin\'. Just don\'t kick that computer! Can\'t wait to read the next chapter...So...Hurry up. Need updates!!!

Thank you, and good night.

Please update soon! We\'re diein\' here!! Not enough of stories out there with these guys in it. Please, please, please!!! ( I know, too many exclaimation marks, hee he)

Loved it hope to see chapter six soon!!!

Oh, that was a wonderful chapter! The smut was beautiful, you write it so well. And TWO sex scenes, more than I thought we\'d get. <3

I\'m sure you do write good action sequences, but I\'m glad you decided to skip it, doing that just seemed to work better for the story, I thought. I\'m glad Kazuma and Ryuhou didn\'t go all the way this chapter, this makes it far more interesting. I love Kazuma\'s \"Promise and a threat\" Best. Line. Ever. XD

Also, it\'s fantastic to see the attention Tachibana\'s getting in the story. I love the boy, hope he doesn\'t get ignored. <3

Keep writing! Can\'t wait to see the next chapter! ^^

(Sorry, continued on from before-)
I\'m sure you do write good action sequences, but I\'m glad you decided to skip it, doing that just seemed to work better for the story, I thought. I\'m glad Kazuma and Ryuhou didn\'t go all the way this chapter, this makes it far more interesting. I love Kazuma\'s \"Promise and a threat\" Best. Line. Ever. XD

Also, it\'s fantastic to see the attention Tachibana\'s getting in the story. I love the boy, hope he doesn\'t get ignored. <3

Keep writing! Can\'t wait to see the next chapter! ^^

This is an incredibly GOOD story! You write beautifully with lots of vivid detail. And of course the steamy, hot sex doesn\'t hurt much either! Hee he. I really like the Tachibana (sp?) addition. I liked his character alot and thought he\'d be good with our boy, Kazuma. Anyway...fantastic fic, and I hope you continue it!

Waiiiiii!! New chapter!! *does the happy fangirl dance* And a double-dose of smut too, mmm... very, very nice.

One thing... it seems some of the formatting was lost here on aff.net. The paragraphs don\'t have spaces between them, and sometimes there\'s not a new paragraph when there\'s a new person speaking dialogue.

Other than that, absolutely wonderful! *fans self and goes to read the ffn version*

Wheee! So glad to see this one up here too. I was worried about the rating restrictions on ff.net, but I don\'t think you\'ll have to worry about that here!

Next chapter, you say? In the works, you say? SEX? *does the happy fangirl dance* Can\'t wait!!