rate_review Reviews

Im all tingly with warm fuzzies ^_^ This is a really cute story as well as thoughtful. I like the way that the story comes together in the end, everything is wrapped up nicely.

This is.....how do I say this....too....short. It\'s just plain short. It\'s a good idea, but it needs more body too it, it looks like its only a page or two long....you also need to work on your sentences and grammer. It\'s just plain choppy. It\'s. Like. This. See. What. I. Mean? Other than that, your idea is a good one and you use good words (instead of 3rd grade words). I like it, but like I said before, the choppy-ness and the shortness bug me. Alot.

*ahem*

*makes poor attempt at promoting her story* Read Numb, it\'s a goooooooood story! Read Numb, I wrote it and it\'s gooooooooood! *kills birds with singing* *blinks* oops....^^