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for Hiro or Eiri?

by Haruna

person clarichan
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...well it could\'ve been a cute fic but all the grammar mistakes made it......difficult to read very difficult....I hope that you get a beta reader to help you out with the editing and stuff....good luck in the future :D
person Anon
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm... this is pretty good!^^ want more!!!

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