rate_review Reviews

I liked this...really good mindless smut.

PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO SAI AND WHAT SAGE HAS IN STORE FOR HIM.
PLEASE HURRY AND WRITE MORE!!!!!
(MEOWS PITIFULLY)

DUDE!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!! i love it i love it i love it!!!! BUT! there should be more! pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee?????????????????????? its so awsome,

hello again. just thought you ought to know that i\'ve been checking on your story. i think that this last chapter wasn\'t as \"passionate\" as the others, but i can understand that you are busy. i really like the idea of this story, Sai being a slave of Sage and Rowen. it really is good. you should keep writing!!! you\'re a natural. update soon, and i\'ll read it!! oh, by the way, when you were talking about one reviewer reviewed your your story after chapter 3, were you talking about me? if not, it still makes me feel special. thank you for thanking me!!! ;)

i love this story poor Sai!! heh but i bet he loved it as much as i did well write more soon Saynora!

Wow. Never expected Rowen and Sage to move so quickly. At least Sai enjoyed it. Heh. Though it was sorta hard for me to imagine how they were positioned. lol. I think it was just me though... my brain is sorta on vacation at the moment. I wonder what else they have in store for him?

I almost feel sorry for Sai in this.. Heh.. But I wonder if he really did enjoy the vibrator? Most likely he did. But what are Sage and Rowen up to yet?

First off, I wanted to thank you for reviewing Dreams of Desire. I thought it fitting if I read your fic in return. So far I\'ve read chapter one only. It\'s a great start and a humorous way to have the three Ronins spend their day together. I could understand Sai\'s nervousness, and Sage\'s slyness and Rowen\'s desire for more of the fun. A few times I felt sorry for Sai, but wondered how far this would go. Curiosity is always good. But now I want to ask a question: Do you have trouble with grammar or spelling? Or are you just typing too fast and aren\'t aware of it? Several of your words are mixed up for another word and some of your spelling is off. I thought I\'d ask cause I wasn\'t sure. If you do need help, let me know, ok? I\'d be glad to help you out. But if not, that\'s fine too. Just take your time if you\'re writing too fast. ^^ I\'ll read and review the next chapter when I get around to it.

It was a great story. I do hope you continue. It was even better than many of the others I read.

Loved that chapeter. I really hope you\'re going to continue this. Can\'t wait for the next chapter.