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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a nice story. ^^ I like it, please update soon ^^
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January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is there going to be more. *sits in a neko-ish way* I do hope you continue. ^^v It\'s very good. ^^v
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THis is very nice. But the paragraphs should be spread out and each time a new person talks maybe put a space so it\'s easier to read? It kinda hurts the eyes and ya lose you place a lot. Maybe also look into getting a beta to help with spellings and grammar and such so people don\'t slam ya for that. This is very nice and is quite funny in parts. I hope ya choose to continue ^^