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FINALLY, I read it as a whole. OMG you added AAxI smut *worships all the place* It was great, I love how Alucard had to swallow the fact she is shagging Alexander XD

*sighs* it\'s over, so sad. Last chapter just great, *laughs evilly* torturing alucard is soooo much fun the smut is really hot and anderson is so fuckable, everything I love is in this fics, THANKS. \'People, proceed to STANDING OVATION\' *clasps, whistels, throws flowers* hope to see more of your fics --Anubis--

I loved that chapter the best.I had thought 13 was the last one,I was so happy to see 14 up.It was great.

Cool ending I loved it.I hope you write more stories,cause that was soooooooo good.Maybe u could write a sequel?

I just love how the story is moving along. Great work so far I hope the next update is just as quick.

oooohh, cant wait for more... usually I can tell where the fic is going but here there\'re too many options & all seem good so suprise us

So far I like.Can\'t wait till it\'s updated again.Hope it will be soon,I really enjoy it,and it\'s really getting good.Keep it up.Your story rocks!!!!!

niave and innocent was what described Mina the most which is what also describes Seras more then it would Integra. I would match Mina and Seras together more then Mina and Integra. I think Integra would be more towards Lucy.
seeing as the case was that Seras was turned to make Integra jealous(as some think), It would seem that he is trying for Lucy instead of Mina now. Things got reversed from stories past.
But anywho, I see nothing wrong with the story except for some spelling and grammer errors. Actually its pretty good.
(I would love to see Seras kick Alucard\'s ass for once) who said that :turns and runs:

This is fucking incrediable. I love this story. Please write more. can\'t wait. I want to read more.

As I said to someone else on FFnet the whole Seras/Pip business is quite an interisting from a psychological pov, *reopens Freud\'s book* sooo, inner turmoil *check*, one is male the other is female plus some strong innuendos going on *check* by the way what would you call Pip \'doing things\' to Seras? het sex? masturbation? both (if possible?) *eyes patient and reads thoughts* ahhhhrr, holy cannolli, that\'s some twisted perv activity going on *takes notes for later use*. Ahem, regarding the story, can wait to see what Alucard has in store to \'punish\' his girls *grins* (really hope to see something twisted, ya know some Integra flirting with Anderson, just to taunt Alucard or the other way around to put Integra off, lol) hehehe have lots of good ideas in mind but its your story so MOOOOOOOORE, can\'t have enough if this story.