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by JayManney4life

person Darkendangel
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was really good. If you\'d continue I would really apreceate it. It takes a Whole new outlook on the bounds of friendship and lovers, neh? Well, thanks and please, PLEASE continue this.

Darkendangel
person Calvin
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome!! continue please!!!! I wait in eager anticipation
person Lilly
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That... was... the cuteist thing I have ever read!!! Oh my god I love it!!! My girlfreind had me read this cuz she told me like 6 months ago that she wanted to do something like this. But I had no Idea what to do!!! then she found this story and voala!!! now we trade places. lots of fun. Please make a chapter 2 we want more ideas!!!
person One pissed Anarchist
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah the quiet ones tend to be the ones that shoot and kill people.
For know reason
person animechick
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i guess it kinda makes sense since ami didn\'t really get a childhood
yet it;s kind of kinky to
person Jessie
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so cute!!! Please please PLEASE do anoter chapter. I do this with my girl freind sometimes, I thought we were the only ones!!! PLEEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE UPDATE!!!
person juraijin1
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this story quite well. I found the idea to be interesting and different,,and that is something that is hard to come by on the \'net. If at all possible I, for one, would like to see a continuation of this story showing how Makoto and Ami may devolpe into a more sexual kind of relationship.
person LadyMoon
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAWWWW that was soooo CUTE!!!! I loved your story I hope you plan to contule it. I would love to read more of it. Thanks for the great read.
person DKN
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. And I thought my mind was the only one that imaged scenes like that. Guess I\'m not a one-of-a-kind breed of writer after all. Then again, my idea of a Sailor Moon/Teen Titans/Beast Wars/Metroid Prime crossover is still unique....right?
person shipposister
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ummmm...It\'s very well written...good detail...but I don\'t much like the plotline...doesn\'t really pan out for me...ummm...you made Ami OOC...but otherwise...very nice...

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