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Ha, I\'ve seriously read this thing over 1,000 times, thus why I need MORE! ^_^ hehe I love it!

Hey, uh...this really needs more! lol \'Furious fucking ensues\' is a teaser...you actually need to describe it! ^^ Will ya consider a redo?? Cuz it\'s pretty hot!

Hiii, there, dear! Despite the couple bashing dickheads, I think you should definitely re-write it and make it even hotter than it already is! The other ppl are right---it IS a teaser, and a major one at that!!! I love it! Jet definitely deserves some action, and he got it...in a hot way! If you need inspiration, feel free to read my Jet/Faye on here! ^_^ Anything to get a fellow writer inspired! Just go for it, go!!!

sorry, I just had to add a pleeease, please, please, PLEEEEEEEASE?? ^^ Another good Jet/Faye on here is \"Whatever Faye Wants...\" if you\'re interested. =-) Just PLEASE rewrite it! PLEAAAAAAASE??? PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE??? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE???


P.S. pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!? ^-^; eheh can ya tell I want it??? lol

I don\'t mean to be harsh or anything, dude, but that wasn\'t very...well...good. It was really choppy/all over the place and your writing style\'s like we (the readers) are on the outside looking in, meaning that we don\'t feel very connected to what\'s going on. Again, I don\'t mean to sound like an uber bitch, but it\'s the truth, is all. ::shrugs::

Why did Jet sound like a country bumpkin??? He never says \'darlin\' or any of the other words you used.