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person Hybris
schedule March 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Even after years have passed since I have first read this story, I still find it to be hands down one of the best written and most entertaining to read stories in the EVA section and I still hold out a little bit for a second chapter with Misato getting involved and maybe beyond the blackout. Either way I hope to see more.
person Shen
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story and I don't think its as bad as you think it is... I think this would definitely be one of my favorites.. it was funny yet hot.. *laughs*
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A work of genius, I regret only that a follow-up was never made.
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You... suck?
Nah - it doesn't even come out half half-hearted. This is fucking terrific (and the bad pun was not intended). I could go on about how much I liked it, but seeing as how you're almost certain to never read this... I won't.
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow... that was bloody amazing.... and (on my opinion) so in charater.... i think if they got it on it would be exactly like that

i salute your excelent work.... very sweet.... painfuly awsome

-Argent... aka Howl_At_The_Moon
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just had to read this story again. No matter how many times I read it I can't get enough of it. This story is what inspired my to become an author. When I first wrote a story, because of my low self-esteem, I wasn't satisfied with it, I thought it was terrible. One of my friends read it however and said they liked it. I then became an author and wrote a few more stories and nobody has flamed me yet!
person supadm
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome Lemon in every respect. You should make more like this one.

Supreme Admiral of the Web
AFF.Net Commanding
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I already sent you an email saying as much, but this kicked so much ass! A few other people have already called this the greatest Eva fic of all time, and I just have to say that this is the only story I have ever found myself COMPELLED to read and reread over and over again!
If anyone took the time to read your livejournal post, it's painfully clear that Asuka is NOT completely ooc, and I am relieved that you have the state of mind to dismiss the views of the nay-sayers.
At the same time, as to anyone who has expressed personal misgivings to you regaurdind the words "Rape me", first of all I want to redirect anyone to my comment above and commend you on your insight into the inner workings of these characters. Secondly, I have read hundreds of stories, both published and internet-posted, many of which being excellent and new york times bestselling novels that always seem to include at least ONE scene of a sexual nature, as well as trashy little novels and stories that are nothing more than softcore pornongrahpy delivery systems, and I just have to say that Asuka's "Rape me" lines were the most erotic thing I have ever read.
I pray you'll take that as a compliment and not as a "what the hell is with this creepy guy?" sort of thing.
Anyway, awesome story that really captures alot of the inner turmoil that made NGE so great, and please deliver us the second chapter soon!
Rawk on friend.
person kratos
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why you are say that this story is no good because I fucking love it. Alot of story change who the cast are but this one keep them the way they appeared on the show well done thanks and bye.
person crash and burn
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
by chance is there going to be a knew chapter soon because i really like this story this is great.

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