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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well if I were Shinji I would have thrown Asuka over the rail and watched her splatter all over the sidewalk right after I blew my load. Or better yet, maybe she would hit a passing car, that would be sweet! Next I would have raped Misato like the whore she is then fucked PenPen for good measure. Also, its a bit annoying when authors say they suck when they really don\'t, have a little self confidence for crying out loud. The fic was great, none of that stupid romance bullshit, just animalistic fucking.
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS WAS A FUCKING ASOME SUMIT IF YOU CAN WRITE THE 2CH! PLEASE
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent fanfic, just like sex it starts with tension, builds foreplay and finishes with a climax. The weakest point might be the inner dialogue where Shinji and Asuka keep on trying to fool themselves to the extreme. I mean if Shinji is a sexy beast and Askuka knows it - why not acknowledge the fact?
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this fic, and despite what you say it\'s really good, i have read REALLY bad fics and this isn\'t one of them
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Double-damn, baby. I was a little concerned at first -- the prose fumbles a little here and there, and there are run-ons everywhere. But you\'ve got a serious knack for natural dialogue and shoot if that weren\'t some hotness! You *know* that\'s how Asuka likes it. Let\'s face it. Nice job!
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yo i think its great that you have the charators stay in character and do a second please ...
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with most reviews here. this one was great
I\'ve read a lot on AFF and few have as well done a plot AND a well done lemon in there.
please continue and for all that it is an...{can\'t think of a good word for arousing} idea...Shinji and Misato should never be together because he really sees her as a surrogate mother...she teases him but still.
me I like Shinji Rei but this worked and that is good enough for me. Hell I found the same thing with HermionexDraco...wierd but right
I\'ve read a lot on AFF and few have as well done a plot AND a well done lemon in there.
please continue and for all that it is an...{can\'t think of a good word for arousing} idea...Shinji and Misato should never be together because he really sees her as a surrogate mother...she teases him but still.
me I like Shinji Rei but this worked and that is good enough for me. Hell I found the same thing with HermionexDraco...wierd but right
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah. badass. dude, the characters actually seemed to be in character, if they were put into this situation, you described how i would think that they acted. j00 r0x0rz.
keep going with the second chapter, i beg of you. i actually read these things because most of the people who write them have talent, and i enjoy good writing. which you do.
keep up the good work.
keep going with the second chapter, i beg of you. i actually read these things because most of the people who write them have talent, and i enjoy good writing. which you do.
keep up the good work.
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, this story is the best fucking Eva lemon I\'ve ever had the pleasure of reading. Hope there\'s a follow up with Shinji/Misato/Asuka/ ;)
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was really nice!!!kinda long but it was worth it!!!^_~ just don\'t put in the threesome!!!pls don\'t!stick with shinji&asuka!!!!and create another chappy!!!YAY!!!i hope you will,,,i\'ll be waiting for that!!!see ya!!!^_^