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January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had a feeling it was just a dream...
Great lemon!
please update soon.
Great lemon!
please update soon.
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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh that\'s cute Shuichi cuddling a piece of paper.
I expected that to happen it is Tatsuha after all.
Please update soon I wander about the pairing in the lemon
I expected that to happen it is Tatsuha after all.
Please update soon I wander about the pairing in the lemon
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHEEE! CONTINUE!!! CONTINUE!!! THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOO COOL!!
the language wasn\'t too cool, but its not ur first language, rite? also, u should space out ur paragraphs more....BUT OTHER THAN THAT, IT ROCKED!!!^_^....grr......stupid taki.....hehe, is yuki the knight in shining armour?^_^
update sooon!!!
~~harahettamonkeyking
the language wasn\'t too cool, but its not ur first language, rite? also, u should space out ur paragraphs more....BUT OTHER THAN THAT, IT ROCKED!!!^_^....grr......stupid taki.....hehe, is yuki the knight in shining armour?^_^
update sooon!!!
~~harahettamonkeyking
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The idea isn\'t bad, but it\'s grammatically atrocious. There were a number of spelling errors (or maybe they were recurring typos)as well. With some corrections to the aforementioned and some proper spacing, I think you could really go somewhere with this. If you\'re not too grammar savvy, I suggest finding a beta. Once you get that worked out, I\'m sure it will fabulous .
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH! UPDATE THE GOD DAMN STORY AND SOON PLEASE!!! I KNOW FOR A FACT THAT MY PATIENCE ISN\'T GONNA LAST LONG ONT HIS ONE! >.<
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting
I like it!
I\'m assuming Shuichi\'s roommate is going to be Taki?
Please write more!
I like it!
I\'m assuming Shuichi\'s roommate is going to be Taki?
Please write more!
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE AND IN WHAT CHAPTER WILL THERE BE A S/Y LEMON CANT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER : )
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I see now. German, eh? It\'s not so bad for English not being your native language. I\'m liking this homoerotic school. Too bad a school like that doesn\'t exist. I\'d enroll as a guy; Although it would have to be a guy with breast implants. Hm, I\'m rambling, so I\'ll go on commenting about your fic.
Haha, Yuki sure did just put that out there with that \"If you think I\'m dead sexy you should have just said so\" (something along those lines)
I do think it\'s an amusing and interesting story. Continue, please. :)
P.S.
My first review, of course, was only constructive criticism. Thank you for taking it like an adult.
Haha, Yuki sure did just put that out there with that \"If you think I\'m dead sexy you should have just said so\" (something along those lines)
I do think it\'s an amusing and interesting story. Continue, please. :)
P.S.
My first review, of course, was only constructive criticism. Thank you for taking it like an adult.
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol should have guessed it\'s Tatsuha *smacks forehead*
Oh poor Shuichi... but i still like it when he gets harassed!
Oh poor Shuichi... but i still like it when he gets harassed!