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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(too lazy to login... again xD) Not bad really, but the 3rd chapters end... you just cut it with Amiboshi, that's not fair for him. But other than that, it was good ^^
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like ur storyline & ur writing style as well as the pairing! lemon nicely done ! i would ,however, like to read more of ur work with the pairing of Nak/Miaka/Hoto! PLEASE , PLEASE , PLEASE , PLEASE , PLEASE , PLEASE , PLEASE DO MY REQUEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW Yui a pro! I really enjoyed this fan fic, altho it has room for emprovements .All the same great job and write more! your #1 fan Emerald Dreamer
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im interested to see more! Like if they decide to live together or not
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad ! I\'m surprised to see an actual amiboshi/suboshi hentai fic that doesn\'t involve both twins going at each other! keep up the good work ^_^
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a very good story. very erotic. please update soon
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good please add more
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this has amazing potential Pleas update and hurry up with the lemon
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love amiboshi and suboshi pairings but \\w yui its even better