rate_review Reviews

I\'m enjoying your writing style here, and the love scene between JJ and Drake was a surefire way of keeping my attention (I adore them), but there was one glaring report that bothered me. If Dee died after he and Ryo moved in together, and Bikky and Cal just get married last year, why did they wait until they were 37 and 39 to get hitched? By that point, Cal would be in danger of never having kids, and they\'v loved each other since they were what, 12 and 14? Ouch for them. Must have been tough. Careful of the huge timespans, though I know you need them to make Dee legal. Maybe the dynamic duo of former streetbrats should have married ten years ago instead? They might even be parents, and that would have been waiting a long time for them.

Just my 2 yen (and yes, I know that little money wouldn\'t buy a handful of sand, but I like the term).

~Mae

I really like this story. I also would like to know where the first part is since you say it is a sequel. I would like to read it.
Anyway, good job! Update soon. :)

I like! I like! please write more!! *big puppy dog eyes* pwease?

Awww, you\'ve got to update. This story is so sweet. That\'s so cute that Dee came back to take care of Ryo. Great job with your writing. Can\'t wait for some citrus between \"Dee\" & Ryo!

OK I like this story ^-^ but...um... where can I find the first part?:Looks confused: you said it\'s a sequeal but i\'ve never seen \"no need for good byes\" o.O also you have some gollum moments of Dee asking something and seemingly answering himself where it\'s supossed to be ryo. well that\'s it keep it up =D
buh bye now XD

Whoa, that was a serious lemon. Nice story, I\'m looking forward to the updates.

This story rocks! I love how you let Dee come back reincarnated! That was sweet. Hurry with the next chapter!!!

Whoa, this is kinda weird O.o Was Dee reincarnated? I noticed a couple of errors, like \'asked Dee\' instead of \'asked Ryo\' at the very begining but the story still looks good and I can\'t wait to see where you\'re going with it.
-magegirl *pondering the theory of reincarnation*

Ok I just read the second chapter and wanted to review it too. First of all Yay Drake for making chief^.^ (He must of really straightened up over the last twenty years since he kind of a slacker in the manga) Wait.. So who\'s JJ partner now? >.< nevermind, I think you switched Dee and Ryo\'s name again at one part. (sorry if I\'m being a pest for pointing it out) You have my mind reeling with this Dee/Daniel guy (and I bet Ryo\'s too) I am so curious about what is up with him. I look forward to the next chapter ^.^
-magegirl*pondering the age difference between Ryo and Daniel*