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Mwa ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!! A perfect ending!!!>=)

OMG- YES! Shinji gets his just deserves! The date rape series I could only read to chapter 3- but I was sick to my stomach by that time. I can\'t believe something so horrible can actually be in a persons fantasies. From what I know of the end, he kills asuka right? You said she as in the dumpster... GROSS.

Good to see he got his just deserves.

Thanks

Both this story and the originals were rather pitiful, I\'m afraid to say. The originals were pitiful in that they had horrid character depictions, but this one was particularly useless, for two reasons: 1) you have no kowledge of crime systems, do you? all the fics, the originals and this, were basically just using the characters of Evangelion in the modern world, as there would be much more advanced...\"toys\" if you will, in that time frame...and also because in that time frame they just might isolate prisoners to prevent group break-outs, dont you think? (retard) but anyway, in the modern world we have yet to discover any means of identifying a criminal with just the dna found in a body, because even though we can confirm it with matching dna, we need the subjects dna to confirm it...all in all, this was a foolish rant made to put a much more notable flame to the original five

this fic was wonderfull, a masterpeice of literature (atleast compared to the excrement that are the other 5 other chapters) really it was funny the way kaworu made shinji his bitch *LOL* i hope all you sick fucks that enjoyed the last 5 ones got a nice hardon seeing shinji get killed. anyway i was going to do the same but you beat me to it i guess... anyeway great work and atleast you made a fic ten times better than the original 5.

P.S. Magnus...GO FUCK YOURSELF!!!!

That sucked balls compared to the beauty of the originals. The first 5 ruled! I laughed my ass off when Asuka was beaten and raped. It kept me happy for days. This is just your pansy attempt to cover up something beatuful. Well hippy, happy? You tarnished the first 5 works of art with this crap.

Thank god, you wrote this. At least I wasn\'t freaked out by the story.

That was ghastly. U FAIL

Okay look, no offence but where is the reality in this. I cannot imagine anything of this happening even in an OOC world of Eva. I wont say \"this is wrong,\" no I will say this is your fantasy, and maybe you want people to notice your sickness, but quite frankly, I think you compare bugger all to AAPhuck Nut. If you ever read his stuff, then well you might pick up an actual plot idea, instead of writing random fics like this.
I thought the Asuka Rape one was bad, but jesus christ man, why make more, pointless waste of time.

I wont be reading anymore.