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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this. It's cute. And Ayame's reaction to being raped, feeling that he had to prove himself as a man by conquering a woman sexually, was very psychologically realistic. So was Tohru's reaction--becoming romantically attached to the man who had taken her viriginity although that's the only thing that happened between them. Akito's thoughts are interesting as well. He is clearly not in a healthy state of mind, wanting to be dominant and yet feeling guilty for it. This is all very interesting to me. Please update soon. ^_^
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I Love it! It's sooo awesome!!!!! Please write more!!! I read all ten chapters in one sitting! I cant wait for the next update! A+++++++
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Have I already reviewed this? I can't remember but it's the second time I've read it... please update soon...! Pretty please, don't wanna sound like a nag but I just really luv this story
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Have I reviewed this? Can't remeber but it's my second time reading it^^ please update soon! Pretty please? don't wanna sound like a nag but I just really luv this story
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAA I love it!!! Your way of writing keeps me so totally hooked to the story! <3 Please continue asap! I really can't wait!! :D
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting...
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
screams:::::::::: Why haven\'t you updated?! My world is crumbling! You must update as soon as possible. I just love the way you portray Ayame and Akito! Who would have guessed that this pairing had so much potential! PLEASE UPDATE!
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello. It is I again. Just sending you another review to remind you of how egarly I await for a new chapter. I hope you update soon!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I never thought I could get into this pairing but you have proven me wrong! I am hooked like a fish and I need more. I like the way you portray Akito and Ayame and how stayed close to their character. Akito is just to HOT so it only makes sense that he would be with Ayame. I personally think that Akito should be the uke and have Ayame become the seme because it seems like Ayame is going through the whole domination worry. When you mentioned how Akito wouldn\'t mind having Ayame take him I was like, (OH HELL YES! THE STRONG MUST BECOME UKES! LET THE SNAKE LOVER BE THE DOMINATE ONE!)
Well I hope you update as soon as possible. Please don\'t leave me hanging!
Well I hope you update as soon as possible. Please don\'t leave me hanging!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! No! You can\'t stop there! I\'m even more enraptured by the story now! Aw and that was so kind of Toohru, I\'m really glad about how you characterized her, and Ayame. This is really good. Please continue. ^^