rate_review Reviews

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
That was the most heart-wrenching, story I\'ve ever heard.
This just proves, once and foe all; that love conquers all, and that nothing can break the power of love.
I was almost crying when Ryo gave up his life to save Dee; and when they both realized that they had become immortal, it was so........touching to see (WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!)

Wow...just wow. this was beautiful. I just loved it. You are a fantastic writter. The visuals were wonderful, plot was fantastic. This was so beautiful. Are you on fan fiction.net? if you are, i would love to read those stories as well. once again...beautiful.

That was so bautyfully written. It had me cryin soooooo bad. I loved it. I hope you write more stories for me to read.

WOW!!! that was sad. i loved it. write more

so.out.of.character.

Ive traveled the universe in search of two hot men like Dee and Ryo. Unfortunately, Neptune was full of transvestites, Venus just had floating pussies, and Mars had dogs with giant cocks. You mean to tell me all this time the hot, passionate men are on EARTH?! Well, hot diggity, im gonna grab myself a bottle of Jack, saddle up the spaceship, and jerk off until I get to Earth.

*fangirling, intense clapping & jumping, gobbets & streams of drool fly everywhere*

i\'m SOOOOOO HAPPY u finished it!!! XD *crying* u had me on the edge of my couch, i seriously didn\'t know how u were going to end it, even right up to the end there. ^_^
AWESOME!

eee. yay. happy ending. very nice story! thanks for sharing it.

Wow, the final conclusion. I thought that after the 2nd chapter, where the wings are gray, they\'d be a little more upset. But they just treat it as dandy, a reflection of their love .... AWWW. I loved the judgement scene, however, I think it told a lot about heirachy and how goes it in the Feilds nad all. Though after Dee and Ryo discover that they\'re both immortal, it ends rather abruptly. I felt that couyld have been extended a little more, given more weight. Oh well, it was still good. Just where did Ryo\'s life force go? *shrug* Add a short euilogue, where they live in a village by the sea or something, a plac ewhere they can be happy :-)

That was so good. I don\'t typically read angel fics but my friend recommended this to me and Im impressed. Good job!
Wind to thy wings!
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