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for Temptation\'s Desire

by dragonphire99

person Kat
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was the most beautiful fanfic ive ever read. it was the one thing ive read that isnt lacking passion. Please keep writing because u could definetly choose writer as your career. thanks for making an actual fanfic.
person Anon
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dee and Ryo passed and did become immortal! I\'m so happy!! Excellent job!!
person 19
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really sad at the end, but i was so happy when they bolth came back. it was beautifully written.
person Jhon Doe
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was simply incredible! First I cried in sadness than in happiness you have a very creative imagination. I hope to see some more of your fanfiction.
person Breathlees_night
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOah!!!! I LOVE IT =) =)

It´s was so cute and tender, and sexy... Is it the end? =)

You must write more Fake stuff!!! great job
person Ro
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow... Ryo\'s a bold little angel, isn\'t he? Manga Ryo is soo sensative and shy... But now that his wings are gray, where will he go? Earth is dangerous and he can\'t go to Hades... Can he? Will Berkley Rose be there? Mwahahaa. I loved it, seriously. Plz email me when you\'ve updated!
person Booze Hound
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ryo is gorgeous, Dee is hot, unfortunately the booze hound is not. He has no worries, nor any fears b/c he knows sex comes after many beers. He wants Ryo\'s cock and Dee\'s nipples, but dont worry, he isnt too fickle.
person Lina the Outlawed Bomber
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I can\'t wait for the rest. ^^v I love your fics. ^^v
person Tsugath
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the best lemons I\'ve had the pleasure of reading in a while. I especially liked your ending of chapter 2, which ended with the description of Ryo\'s wings turning grey. Can\'t wait for the next installment, to see what is going to happen now.
person Anon
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter you have here. I felt that the love scene was pulled and stretched out though I did enjoy the chapter. Even though I feel that way I don\'t believe that you did not overkill like other artist have the feeling to do. I cant wait to see how you will pull the next chapter together and see what is in store for the new love birds....

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