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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BTW i think ken and ran should adopt a kid and ken can be a momy yay i love my twisted mind
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im back and no you didnt scare me away i just had a lot to do and i hadnt had a chance to read your up dates till recently. but as for this chapter how dare you make ran a meany its not fair he should get a spanking thats what ill do ill give ran a spanking now that thats settled im going to cuddle ken and spank ran bye
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I\'m glad you liked my thoughts about Ran\'s possessiveness. For the moment I don\'t really have other ideas or suggestions, but may be they\'ll come to me as the story continues (does a dance of joy because the story will be continued). I like the idea to put in Ran\'s master and may be you could also let Yuriko come back (poor girl, you made her into a stalker).
Now, as for the chapter, you go Ken! I was really impressed how Ken stood up for himself against Ran. I found it really amazing since in one of the previous chapters he had told Yohji he couldn\'t live without Ran (when Ausaka shows up) and now he tells Ran that if he must he\'ll be able to go on without the vampire. It shows how much Ken has matured during the whole ordeal with Takatori.
On the other end I kinda could see Ran\'s point. He just wants to keep his lover safe. Unfortunately he really went about it the wrong way. It kinda makes you wonder if he was also like that in previous realtionships or that may be something happened in the past to one of his previous lovers or friends that makes him so scared to lose Ken. But I guess we\'ll get more to know about Ran\'s past when his master shows up.
Anyway I really liked how you described the argument. I could just picture them in front of me going of on each other. And as in every argument you mostly get so worked up that you start saying things you\'ll regreat deeply later on (and I do belive that this will be manely in Ran\'s case). So I found it very reallistic.
The whole picture thing was also nice. Ran starting to feel insecure because Ken had never laughed to him like he did on the picture with Kase. It shows that Ken isn\'t the only one who has dificulities with relationships. Even our Ran who seems like a rock to cling on, has his own issues to deal with. (May I suggest some psychiatric counceling) It\'s really (damn it how many times have I used this word yet?) nice to see the characters develop more and to get to know them better.
Hope you\'ll update soon and till then,
kisses and hugges
Gillie
I\'m glad you liked my thoughts about Ran\'s possessiveness. For the moment I don\'t really have other ideas or suggestions, but may be they\'ll come to me as the story continues (does a dance of joy because the story will be continued). I like the idea to put in Ran\'s master and may be you could also let Yuriko come back (poor girl, you made her into a stalker).
Now, as for the chapter, you go Ken! I was really impressed how Ken stood up for himself against Ran. I found it really amazing since in one of the previous chapters he had told Yohji he couldn\'t live without Ran (when Ausaka shows up) and now he tells Ran that if he must he\'ll be able to go on without the vampire. It shows how much Ken has matured during the whole ordeal with Takatori.
On the other end I kinda could see Ran\'s point. He just wants to keep his lover safe. Unfortunately he really went about it the wrong way. It kinda makes you wonder if he was also like that in previous realtionships or that may be something happened in the past to one of his previous lovers or friends that makes him so scared to lose Ken. But I guess we\'ll get more to know about Ran\'s past when his master shows up.
Anyway I really liked how you described the argument. I could just picture them in front of me going of on each other. And as in every argument you mostly get so worked up that you start saying things you\'ll regreat deeply later on (and I do belive that this will be manely in Ran\'s case). So I found it very reallistic.
The whole picture thing was also nice. Ran starting to feel insecure because Ken had never laughed to him like he did on the picture with Kase. It shows that Ken isn\'t the only one who has dificulities with relationships. Even our Ran who seems like a rock to cling on, has his own issues to deal with. (May I suggest some psychiatric counceling) It\'s really (damn it how many times have I used this word yet?) nice to see the characters develop more and to get to know them better.
Hope you\'ll update soon and till then,
kisses and hugges
Gillie
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, trouble in paradise. Ran\'s possessiveness is getting him into trouble but I know Ken will forgive him!
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ken is of a rare type, being able to forgive Kase like that. Ken is just sooo sweet and that\'s why I love him so much. Don\'t worry the chapter made perfect sense. I think you should bring in Ran\'s master.... that could make for some really awesome plotlines.
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay Ken is just way to good for this world. I mean just being able to forgive Kase just like that, it takes a great personality. On the other hand I can understand Ken a little since Kase didn\'t get a really pleasant death and he just didn\'t know how to love in the right way.
But I\'m beginning to get the creepers about Ran. Man he is so clingy. That\'s not healty! In the beginning I found it very cute that they missed each other so much when they were apart, but now it horrifies me a bit. I mean it\'s okay to be madly in love and to want every minute of your life with that person, but you also have to respect your lover as a person and that means that he or she ahs an own life and isn\'t there 24 hours a day with you. So go and get some help Ran before you destroy your relationship with Kenken by being to much possessive.
As to ending the story, I hope you won\'t do it yet. I like the idea of some more rough water to swim through before all ends happy and well or not. But if you decide to stop then make those two last chapters killer ones okay????
Kisses and hugges
Gillie
But I\'m beginning to get the creepers about Ran. Man he is so clingy. That\'s not healty! In the beginning I found it very cute that they missed each other so much when they were apart, but now it horrifies me a bit. I mean it\'s okay to be madly in love and to want every minute of your life with that person, but you also have to respect your lover as a person and that means that he or she ahs an own life and isn\'t there 24 hours a day with you. So go and get some help Ran before you destroy your relationship with Kenken by being to much possessive.
As to ending the story, I hope you won\'t do it yet. I like the idea of some more rough water to swim through before all ends happy and well or not. But if you decide to stop then make those two last chapters killer ones okay????
Kisses and hugges
Gillie
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a hot chapter. I don\'t think I mentioned this before but I love it that Ran calls Ken his Ken kitten. That is so cute.
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice and really sweet ^_^
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, just change the name of the story in \"Fan addicted\"! Man I\'m just addicted to this story. But what does that say about me??!!! Jezus, I like reading about other people (although they are just charaters in a story) their sex life. I really need a life (now where did I put my boyfriend again?)
Okay, this is just so fluffy and cute. Ran and Ken are really made for each other (eyes everybody who thinks differently and gives them a glare that can revilaze with Ran\'s glare). I\'m still curious about what you still have planned for our couple. Somehow I just can\'t shake the feeling that there is still a storm brewing and that our lovebirds aren\'t out of the woods yet.
So update soon!!!!!!!
Kisses and hugges
Gillie
Okay, this is just so fluffy and cute. Ran and Ken are really made for each other (eyes everybody who thinks differently and gives them a glare that can revilaze with Ran\'s glare). I\'m still curious about what you still have planned for our couple. Somehow I just can\'t shake the feeling that there is still a storm brewing and that our lovebirds aren\'t out of the woods yet.
So update soon!!!!!!!
Kisses and hugges
Gillie
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It all went a bit faster than I expected... but whoa, overload!! Is everything nice and well now that Kase and Takatori are dead??? Don\'t tell me it\'s over... I\'ll cry!!!