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Poor Ken! He is so insecure, the poor lad.

Hey,

I just wanted to let you know that I just adore this fan fiction!!!! Yes, you read it right I ADORE it. Normally I don\'t read fan fictions in which the boys are different portrayed as in the tv-serie (and making some of the characters being vampires is very much changing them). But I gave you\'re story a try and I\'m glad I did because it is just wonderful! I don\'t even mind any more that there are vampires in the story. Hell, it makes the love relation between Ken and Ran just more beautiful ( and yes I love the Ran/Ken coupling). Every time I\'ve read the update, I can\'t wait for the next chapter. Luckely you update regurarly (keep doing that please???).
The only little minus I\'ve found uptil now is that I\'m a little disappointed with the final battle between Takatori goons and the others. You\'ve been working towards this confrontation for so many chapters and then you finish it in about one chapter (and a little of the previous chapter). I had expected that you would make it last longer and that there would happen more dramatic things. (such as also some of the good guys who die!)
But enough complaining. I\'m very curious to what you have still planned further, so update soon!!!!!! I LOVE you!!!

Kisses and hugges
Gillie

Cute! Fluff is good. Revenge is good too, though. When does that bastard Kase finally get what he has coming?

Sweet chapter. Ken/Ran snuggles is always a good thing.

this was a great chapter i cant wait for the next one i even got my friend hooked on the story she says you have the best lemons she s ever read keep it up

Awww, another nice chapter. Poor Ken and Ran, they\'ve been through so much but at least they have each other.

Very sweet, alittle sad, but still dying to see what happens next. You could keep writing this story forever and I would continue to read it!

I have been truely enjoying your story so far and look forward to more. There are only two things really that i can find fault with. One is that it\'s very difficult sometimes to tell who is talking. The way the paragraphs are it\'s hard to tell if it\'s Ran or Ken saying or doing something. The other thing was introducing so many characters at one time. Other then that i think the story flows very well and you have done a wonderful job with the characters.

Cool chapter as always! Sorry I didn\'t give a review sooner, I was rereading the story and I relized I forgot to leave one for this chapter.

Very sweet chapter. RanXKen forever! I never liked Kase, and I\'m glad he\'s soon to getting what he deserved. I love how you kept Farfie so in character(though he was only in this chapter for a few moments) but still made him a good guy... kinda... well, as good as he can be, really.