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I reviewed, so UPDATE~!!! XD
I really love how you turned this to an AU~
Prince-EMperor-Nobels type really do appeal to me~!!! XD
and Shuichi having to hide his true identity is wow~!!!
and Yuki!!!

UPDATE PLEASE~!!! XD

please update soon... man this is a really cool fic

Alright you...you big sadist! Give me more!!! I mean seriously, you posted half of this in Gurabiteshiyon.net and you didn't post anymore. I was soooo sad I was practically crying and then I come here and find this?! YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE! For the sake of myself! You must! :sniff: okay okay, I'm not mad cause the story's so great. I just wish more more and more would come. Thanks for this awesome post! Notify me when you post a new one. Promise?

more more o fthe story i love itand can notwait for more of the story very good

hey hey why don't you write the next ones I wanna know what happens. I think the series is good. ;_; ah, but i suppose im a year late.

Do you have any other writings? I wanna see~! Keep up! Great writing.
Don't worry too much about the minor grammar and spelling mistakes, if you become a writer~, thats what editors are for~! =D

Your fic is improving. At first the characters were really superficial and stereotyped. Way to go on character development and keep up the good work. But please, find yourself a beta. You write in English really well, much better than I write in my foreign language, but a native speaker will still notice the difference. Besides betas also help with style and little plot problems (you accidently wrote "Shuichi" instead of "Eiri" in that scene where Eiri throws Tohma out of the room). Or just proof it yourself: that really helps

Just keep going, and finish the fic. We look forward to your next chapter!

I really like this story, you are an amazing writer. ^_^ And I was really sad when I thought you wouldn't no longer update this, but now I'm happy again. :D I can't wait to see the next chapter..

Sorry my bad english, I hope you understand it. ^^;;

more chapter of the story love it and you are doing good on it and plasce more chapter of the story .

I love this story. I mean it. This is the only place I have found that has the most chapters though. Please update.