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Sorry, but this chapter just sucked. Getting Ryuichi pregnant and then having a miscarriage was just NOT needed, there are already enough crappy mpregs in the Gravitation section. And when the hell is Shuichi going to wake up? The story\'s getting pretty boring without him.

SQUEEEEEEE!!!!

yay! I thought this was discontinued! ZOMGI\'MSOHAPPYITISN\'T *does dance of joy* yes, so... my reaction might seem a little over the top... it\'s just I\'ve been so curious about how the story would continue... yeah, so I\'mma go read it now :P

Nuuuu, not mpreg! *flails and dies* Mpreg goes against all my fandom principles. Drat. And I really liked this fic.

I really like your story, but I have some suggestions. I assume that the advisor Thoma is actually suppose to be Tohma, or Touma, depending on whether it bothers you that the Japanese don\'t have Hs when they use romanji (sp?). Also, in chapter 2 Eiri makes a comment about Mexico, but in the 13th century Mexico hadn\'t been discovered yet. You use the word \"yeah\" a lot in your story, but I think it would sound more proper if you used \"yes\" instead. The only other thing I have to say is you should proofread your chapters more closely, there are typos and small mistakes. Anyway, I want to go read the rest so until later!

You keep changing between Tohma and Touma, it\'s kind of annoying. Anyway, I like the story, keep up the good work.

whoa...its a very nice story...plzz go on writing...don leave me hanging

this is an awesome story everything about it can't wait until the other parts of the story so please contince!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice story, keep it up!

you have to continue this. I\'m pulling my hair in anticipation!

waaaah poor shu-chan i do hope you update again soon!!! its getting exciting!!!