rate_review Reviews

Please continue this story soon! It\'s completely adorable and one of my favorite stories. You have a really nice style of writing and your story has the perfect mixture of comedy and suspense. Keep it up!

I love the idea of how this is going, very original and it\'s leaving me wanting to find out more. I hope that you keep on writing this fic, don\'t give up on it ever because it\'s very nicely done. ^^ Since there is a lot of fanfiction that seems to be the same, it\'s hard to find an interesting theme, but I must admit that you got me hooked. I read it all in one shot and it took me an entire night. (I MISSED OUT ON A NIGHT\'S SLEEP BECAUSE OF YOU XPPP) And I\'m waiting to find out what happens with Taki and Tohma, since it\'s a very interesting plot-twist. (I WANT MORE ;_;)

But at the same time I\'m finding mistakes that can be rather irksome since they are easily seen for someone who is as familiar to the english language as I am. Because I love this fic, and gravitation, and I\'m feeling really nice >>; I can offer to beta read for you if you wish. If you already have seomeone or don\'t want me to then I don\'t care. XDD; But I would love to help you make this fic perfect. >>

Some contact information if you\'re interested:
little_black_dress@mailbolt.com <-- e-mail
hentail337 <-- AIM
damned_man81@hotmail.com <-- MSN

I don\'t know what all you have, but either way you should be able to contact me somehow if you want. XD; I\'ve also got an account here (which I\'m too lazy to log into at the moment >>) It\'s \"Twittchy\", so some of my writing is posted there.

Anyways, I\'m done blabbering now. >>;

I think you did a great job writing this story. The theme is unique. Please update soon.

this is fantastic pls update asap!

your story is hot and i really like to read it.
you know......
you are one of a few author that become my favorites author.

but i want to know.........
when you are going to send the next chapter?
i can\'t wait to read it.

i hope shu-chan and yuki will be together soand i\'m really sorry for my horrible english.
i guess that because english is not my mother language.

ja ne!

plz update soon :(

OH MY GOD! this is an awsome fic. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please and thank you!

OMG! the story is great please right more!

awsome chapter.
cant wait for the next one.
please dont take too long.
boy, tohma is an ass hole.
i think Ryuichi should just come out and tell the prince the truth.
please up date soon!!

Bravo! great! beatiful! I hope you update quicker this time.