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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the story and i want to know what happens plz update quick! oh and the lemon part was great when it comes to writteing you are outstanding.
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story and i can\'t wait tell you update!
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WRIE NOW PLAZ T.T
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WRIT MORE NOW
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Y\'know, I think this fic is really good, but... I think you focused a bit too much on the scene between Tat and Ryu here... I even skipped the last part of it because it was too drawn out... erm... so... my guess is that Touma pushed Shu in the lake... :P can\'t somebody come and beat him up? *kidding* \'nyway... please update soon again. ;)
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story very much, however there are many typos and editing your chapter a second time before you submitted it would bring out better writing quality. So keep writnign, I am looking forward to your next chapter!
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT HAPPENED TO SHUUICHI!!
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well a lemon is a lemon so who can complain? Most definitely not me!!^__~ Hmm, Shuichi won\'t wake up, I guess that Tohma must\'ve tried to drown him, but then again I could be wrong... Well, I\'m anticipating the next chapter, so keep up the good work^__^!!!
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHHHHH GODDDDD!!!!!!!!!
That was pretty intense, i loved every minute of it, you have an adictive style. Please I want more of Yuki and Shu, I think ís time for yuki to know who Shu really is... =)
Pretty please update this soon !!! =)
That was pretty intense, i loved every minute of it, you have an adictive style. Please I want more of Yuki and Shu, I think ís time for yuki to know who Shu really is... =)
Pretty please update this soon !!! =)
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT WRITE MORE PLEASE !!!!!!!! NEED MORE HAVE TO REED NEXT CHAPPY PIEAZZZZZZ ^.~