rate_review Reviews

Motoko/Mitsune rules man! more of them!

I rather enjoyed that.

\"Sorry for the Shinobu fans, but I\'ve got enough morals not to throw a minor into such a story. Trust me, I\'m a big Shinobu fan! But I can\'t bring myself to ruin her innocence in one of my stories!\"

You wimp....

have the two older sisters join the fun & all of the girls end up prenant & it would be even better

Well, this was the first fan fiction i\'ve ever read, and it was WAY better than i thought i could. You are a great writer, you stuck to everyone true emotions (give or take, i can see motoko doing that). Also, i like the fact that you stayed away from slang words like PUSSY and DICK, you were much more creative most other people. Please write another one, i hate it when people leave me hanging.
P.S. I think Su should play a bigger role in the next one though, just a thought.

When does Su her sister and Motokos sister join in

Did you include the possibility of no protection for them

This is actually very good um .....Up the detail a bit if you need an example read The secound tenchi muyo fic on the first page the first chapter has nothing but kissing but o my god it was awesome it has six chapter in case your woundering and the sex doesn\'t happen till chapter six it has like a hundred rewiews. I strongly encourage a sequle i no i spelled that wrong. But you got the just. Anyway i hope you continue this story or make a new love hina fic this section needs some new blood

please email if you make a new story

I love this story. Please make a sequal.

Must continue this you must * gives the evil eye * need another chapter soon