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I love this!! It\'s a great idea and the chapters are adorable. Update soon,k?

Those ficlets were beautiful. ^^ I can\'t wait to read more. And wow, I get to read 27 more of them! Lol Hope you update soon. ^^

that was soo touching!!! I really liked it, please write more.

I don\'t know if it was jest me reading into it due to too much gravitation, or if you meant to make it that way, but i felt as if i could totally tell what Yuki\'s true emotions were lying underneath his words for the third fic. Keep up the beautiful work ^_^

(Ch. 3)
Oh beautiful romantic angst.

Wonderful chapter. Very well written.


Until teh next,
Ja ne~

My favorite was the first one...at least, so far. But I like how they both have a nice sweet theme to them, despite the lack of action. Its a refreshing break. Keep it up!

(Ch. 1) Hilarious. Silly. Wonderfuly written.

(Ch. 2) Such a relaxed tone, I felt as if I were the one at the beach having a nice laid back vacation. Really beautiful. But I\'ve gotta tell ya, towards the edn you used the expression \"Twist my arm\". Now I understand it, but it took me a few minutes until I realized it was just slang and not Yuki commanding Shu to twist his arm. XDD
I\'m silly like that.


Anyways, I really enjoyed both chapters and the main idea behind this fanfiction. I\'m a huge YukiXShuichi fan, so... ya, it\'s really nice to finally see some well written fanfictions on aff that aren\'t just good plot + bad spelling, or good spelling + jaded plot.

Hope you get around to updating soon,
But until then,
Ja ne~

Owwie...I\'ve had sunburns that color...they\'re not fun at all. Sweet story, though...very sweet how Yuki takes care of li\'l Shu-chan :D

Cute :D I haven\'t had Jolt in a long time...I\'m weird, though...it put me to sleep. Caffine from another source...I like that line :D

are you going to be continuing this or doing 30 seperate ficlets?