rate_review Reviews

Wow. Do you have any idea how much you improved over the course of this story? The first few chapters were a bit hard to read (like looking back on what I wrote when I was 14, yeah?) but by the end you gained so much strength, clarity and flow! I feel absurdley proud of you, considering we've never met. But really, the quality skyrocketed. Also, I truly enjoyed the storyline you came up with, though at times it seemed like you were writting about things you don't know much about; the parts about pregnancy and sex, for example. However, this didn't detract from my overall enjoyment. I found it oddly cute, actually. Is that strange? As a mother myself, Yaten's miscarriage was devastating for me to read. I can't imagine what I'dve done if I'd lost my girl like that. (I hate calling myself a mum, it makes me feel so old! I'm only 18!) In any case, I demand that you continue soon. Yeah, you heard me. I demand. Gimme that sequel you've promised! I wants it! Obey me! Or...er...please?

*wipes tears from eyes*Ack! That was so sad! T_T Now I need to go post the rest of Starlight Memories. I finished that about a week ago.... But, you know I\'m here if you need my help! Well, not so much this week, but drop me an e-mail!

<3 Meikaa-chan

....That was sad....terribly so, but I think you did good. I will definitely look forward to an sequel to see what ends up happening.(This nice sentence translates too \"Damn straight you will write a sequel, so we the readers know what happens!\") Just kidding, Keep up the fabulous work.... :)

~Moon-Daisuke

Okay, now I wanna cry. That was so sad...=( Poor Yaten and Taiki...anyways, it was wonderful as usual. Please update soon! ^_^

Aww.... ;_; Poor Taiki! Poor Yaten! That\'s so sad. *sniffles*I was crying earlier this evening because of something a friend wrote to me. That made me cry anymore. ^_^;

Anyways, I\'m hoping to be done with Starlight Memories by the end of July. The sequel won\'t be that long. I mad a Starlights music video. But, it\'s on a friend\'s computer. If we burn it, I\'ll show you.

(to lazy to log in ) at any rate, in the future, if you want to go through a nine month thing where she has a child, or any star light for that matter, then email me and i\'d be more then happy to assist in writting a birth sceane. Yet, you did well on your own. because births are much like that, but with a lot of visiable blood, and detailed inch by inch head-first as the child comes out.

I loved this.........it touched me so much. I cried so hard because it was really well written.

I\'m American, so you at least have one American reader. ^_^ This chapter was amazing, you are a fantastic writer. I hope to see more soon! Ja!

AH! Very nice cliffhanger. I liked that. I only saw a few grammatical errors. If you still need someone to edit your work, I\'m here. ^_^ I\'m out of school now, so I have days that I have nothing to do. Give me a buzz on my MSN messenger screen name or yahoo screen name...

MSN- the_wind_the_sea@hotmail.com
Yahoo- the_wind_the_sea

I don\'t have AIM or ICQ, sorry. But, I have some pretty evil cliffhangers myself in my work Starlight Memories, which I have yet to release to the general public.

I am interested to see who the enemy is

now as for the fight/attack scene....well you closed it off all of a sudden and I was confused with the staring why didn\'t sailor moon and people help?

anyway I think you have some good stuff but play the whole scene out and don\'t cut conners on the content. By that (I) feel you leave out some details and rush scenes

I still like this story and will wait for your next chap