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*squees* Wohoo another chapter! I\'m always late reading..hehe. It\'s getting very good, I can\'t wait to see what happens to Yaten! Hope to see the next chapter soon. ^___^

Fwee! This is so good! ^_^ I\'ve been having fun reading this. Please continue soon, na no da.

Your Japanese was very good. If you need any help with it in the future, ask me. ^_^; I am studying Japanese and I\'m going to Japan next July. ^_^;

Nice, leave it at a cliffhanger. I\'m using my MSN messenger more now, so if you want to instant message me, feel free to.

Hi, read, 5-6-7. Now I see you have a lot going on now, Galaxia?(I think I like that she is included!) Why did the princess faint in chap 5? That was sudden and weird and Seiya\'s reaction to is was...lax. After her staring for minutes then fainting for no known reason he should have been more upset.

Then the \"gift\" that Galaxia gave Taiki? Why did she give it? and only to him? I think you have a lot of ideas that you are trying to jam into chaps without thinking and explaining them properly(and yes I know you can\'t tell it all, but as of now they are just to incomplete)

Chap 7 was good, I like the Common language thing and showing Serena a little grown up. I might have missed why a coucil was needed and what evil is coming their way? I thought they were in peace after glaxia but again I may have missed it, if I didn\'t then you need to make sure you explain the state of the galaxy in more detail.

Okay, I hope you took my comments as trying to be helpful, I do like your story, that is why I continue to real, but you need to work on more smoothly connecting all your plots and ideas so they flow better.

Wow........I liked it. I am curious where you are going with it. I am wondering about this change. Ahh I will be patient and keep my rambling thoughts/ possibilities to myself for now......... Keep up the FANTASTIC work. I am really enjoying this story.

~Moon-Daisuke

Too lazy to log in..T_T;;

Cuute! ^_^ I really enjoyed this chapter. Please continue soon, I love your work. ^_~

Hey! It\'s me. I\'m too lazy to logg in. Good job on this chapter. Your writing is vastly improving and I\'m proud of you! Remember, I\'m open for beta\'ing jobs if you need it.

He plunged into her. She gasped and flinched, her eyes wide. \"Oh,
Goddess!\" She cried. ?????

You\'re a virgin aren\'t you?

Woo very cool adding Galaxia there! That was a very cute chapter. Please update soon! ^_^

Sorry, really lazy, don\'t want to logg in.

But, nice chapter. It\'s very well written. Yes, feel free to contact me if you want me to beta your stuff. I\'ve been very busy lately and it\'s been dying down, so I have a lot of free time. Well, for the next three weeks, then it gets busy again. What is Galaixa up to?