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finally i get to read a fic where Kakyuu is a well-developed char. and that you are pairing up her w/ seiya is also great and refreashing(the seiya/usagi pairing has been beaten down so much).
hmmmm...is usagi gonna be jealous??

I like this even though it is a Seiya/Kakyuu story. I think this chapter was good. Surprised the crap out of me with the Galaxia thing. Great work. If you need someone to beta read just give me an email and let me know what you want. Keep up the fantastic work and I will wait patiently for more! :)

~Moon-Daisuke

Great chapter! I loved it. I can\'t wait until the next one comes out. I\'m seeing less and less gramatical errors and I like that.

GOOD JOB i LOVE seeing Kakyuu real, AND WITH A personality, developing on for her myself in a story. GOOD JOB

NOOOO! Please please I hope she\'s not going to say she loves him! Please I hope your teasing! Seiya needs Usagi not his own Princess! Great work though!!! :) I\'ll wait patiently. I cannot wait for more. I am excited, hopefully you keep going beyond the birth! :)

~Moon-Daisuke

wow!! i loved your story!! it was really good and i really want to know what it is your gonna write down later on! keep up the good work their...

Yo Taiki-poke! Yes, it is me, muhahaha. I felt like posting something just because well because I could so blah. Yeah Kimi would most likely spazz on you so I\'d advise not tellig her....lmao. Yeah I know I\'m missing a lot of school, but I\'d rather not be there throwing up and crap, I\'d prefer to do that at home. Besides I\'ve only missed three days, that\'s not THAT much, I\'ve missed three weeks before so meh. I\'ll be back tomorrow anyways, but I was informed you won\'t be *shrug* Oh well. You\'ve been on msn for like ever, you haven\'t once signed off, what\'re you doing o_O Well, anyways I got to go, working on the next chapter to tempting fate so blah.
~*~Naru~*~

I like the interaction with Seiya and Yaten

and the princess, I think she can be sweet but very serious when need be,

I hope the knowing she\'s pregnant (less then 24 hours later)is because thier Scouts, or maybe(she\'s been body snatched by some force!) either way good job, maybe Seiya can help the princess relieve some stress(grins!)

I love seeing Starlight stories! There aren\'t enough of them out there! I think that the third chapter is better than the first two. It doesn\'t seem as rushed as the first two did. But, overall, I really liked it. Maybe one day, I\'ll post the Starlight story that I am working on. Well, it\'s sixteen chapters and not done... But, I really like it. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Starlights kick ass!!

Ahh..is Yaten..pregnant? Ohhh boy..0_0 This should be very interesting....^_^ Hope to see the next chapter soon!