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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was the best story i've read out of this whole pokemon chapters. If you can write more of Ash/Gary fan fics that would be great!!!
Yaoi is #1^.^
Yaoi is #1^.^
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Loved your story! ^-^ But seriously if you don't make it into a series I'm going to KILL you!!! Lol I'm just joking. Though I will hurt you. So anywayz, great fic, and I hope o see that you have other installments soon!!! ^-^
Vix
Vix
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
iw was alright but you should have wrote how they had sex
as an example (as gary kissed ash down his soft,moist body ash moaned with pleasure)
other than that i think it was decent
as an example (as gary kissed ash down his soft,moist body ash moaned with pleasure)
other than that i think it was decent
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your fics, and a sequel would be nice.
Go on pals !!!
Go on pals !!!
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweeeeeeeet!!!
Soo~Kawaii~
Soo~Kawaii~
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You tricked me! Where\'s the lemon part? (maybe I wouldn\'t have been so disappointed if you had given it a more accurate rating...say, PG-13
It was cute, but misinforming.
It was cute, but misinforming.
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, this was sweet, but for some strange reason it\'s so familiar! Was this reposted or posted on another site? Hmm. Dejavu I suppose. (Goddess, I wish I could spell). Anyway, it was cute and adorable.
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ehhh... A Little lacking in the, ahem, sex area. Aside from that it was great.
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not so bad, it might be interesthing to see what will happen next. I love Shishi´s fics.
see you
see you