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by yellowhorde

person Jiya
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this was a real good story!! I cant wait to read more!!! ((PS: Good luck with your assignments!!))
person jORDANA
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No!You can't end with a cliffhanger! UNFAIR! pLEASE CONTINUE!
person Lawr
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How the hell is that suposed to be an ending? Damnit, you just as bad as the writer of the real manga. That's no way to end a story.
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. But ahhhh!! How can you end it like that?!? I hope there is much more to come. You write both characters very well, and I\'m wondering about these strange watcher people... Hmm. Well, thanks for sharing, and I\'m looking forward to more! =]
person Korde
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is a great story! I hope you write more. Soon! Please?
person comicfancat
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a very weel written story.Knowing the story from the books you did well bringing both mens attitudes to play out .Plus I think
it\'d be a fun relationship to explore more of.Though it being a one-shot it was not nice to add that little unknown at the end.

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