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for Teaching Goku

by Quirk

person flow
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yummy loving keep up the good work
person Jdee
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Weeeee nice I finally caught up... and I got my net back after three weeks and I see you\'ve updated... you\'ve done so well on this fic, they all seem so IC it\'s amazing I still have trouble pulling that off... and this unlikely couple is becoming so darn cute! I love it... And the move was fine it\'s the clean up after the housewarming and the slight killer hangover the day after lol n e ways keep up the good work!
person Terry
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Sanzo is such a prick, I where this is going, please update soon, I can\'t wait for the next chapter!
person Atocha
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh god im confuised...DAMN YOU TWO STOP FUCKING AROUND AND JUST SAY WHO YOU WANT TO BE WITH!!!!!!!!!!!
person coolbunny234
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet. Once again you\'ve left me happy and wanting more. xD I love you <3 <3

I really like the little twist with Sanzo kissing Gojyo in order to kiss Goku in a weird way. Poor Priesty. *glomps Sanzo*

Aww, I think it\'s cute how Gojyo doesn\'t want to let Goku down! You are really making me like this pairing. You make it work without taking Gojyo out of character. Most GokuXGojyo fics take Gojyo out of character and such, but yours doesn\'t. <3 Yee.

Anyway, I\'ll be looking forward to the next chapter! <3
person coolbunny234
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, it didn\'t submit my whole post. o.o *kicks the site* Anyway, I was just saying how happy the chapter made me and that I love how you don\'t take Gojyo out of character for this pairing. Usually, that seems to be what people do. You make me really like the GojyoXGoku coupling. Yee! *glompage* I really liked the whole Sanzo kissing Gojyo to kiss Goku thing. Poor priesty. I\'ll be looking forward to the next chapter!
person Dragyn Phyre
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how about Angynnie? o.O :P I need sleep, lol. been up for 24+ hours, but saw you had updated so bed just had to wait:P

\"(There it goes, that damned marshmallow feeling...)\"

...love the marshmellow feelings *_* I\'m guessing Goku is a lil annoyed/curious about the \"pretty baby\" comment? This should be interesting. >:)

~Angel/Gynnie
person Maiden of the Blue Moon
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nyah? You like my name/Title? - _ - (sigh)
I FEEL SO HONORED!!!!!!!!!!! SOMEONE ACTUALLY ACKNOWLEDGES MY EXISTANCE IN AFF.NET!!!!!! (weeps tears of joy) I really enjoy your writing. Lady of ...Trade Quirks, you are a brilliant author. This fic is ingenous. You somehow made this couple work without deviating from their normal character!!! I\'m just starting fanfiction writing and I\'ve posted a couple of my fics (The very first one I\'ve ever written and my third one) and I am really learning alot from you and other great aff.net authors. I\'ve been trying to put your story on my recommended reading list but I\'m having issues figuring out how (scratches head). ^.^;; (bow) If it\'s not too much to ask, please check them out and offer me some tips. Bye bye and Keep writing!!
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heyyy. how you doin? lol, dont mind me. i\'m just actiin\' silly. the fact that i\'m attending yaoi-con this year just smacked me accross my forehead. wow, you\'re really on the ball this month. we got not one but two lovely \"this is to help further the plot\" chappies. so it\'s the monkey, huh? *shakes head* again, no offense to you or your plot (the lovely, future smut-filled plot that it is. *hint hint*), i\'m not surprised. i mean, what else could it be? now if it was gojyo, sanzo was actually kissin\' and not some attempt to taste goku through gojyo, then i\'d be shocked. seriously. my WTF face would have shown up in the review like 5 or more times. then i would have had to issue out a death warrant on sanzo for attempting to steal him away from goku. i like seeing the monkey happy and well-fucked. especially when gojyo\'s doing the fuckin\'. ^__^

anyway, beautiful work as usual. i loved the way gojyo declared to himself that he\'s not going to cheat on Goku, how it\'s not going to be him who breaks it off and leaves first and that he\'s not going to let the monkey down. *huggles gojyo to a point of near death* i am sooo proud of you and these changes that are happening to you and your way of thinking. and when you spared goku from another session of ass-pounding action *rotflmao* my respect for you went way up for that action. (and the ingenius way you guys got off. *evil grin*) now the only thing is, what the hell was goku getting ready to ask gojyo about before he left for the bath? i must been too busy enjoying the smut to catch whatever he meant. *shugs* oh well. i gotta go now but i, of course, will be back. always looking foward to the next update, so until next time, ja.

~Devi

P.S.: Do you like Naruto (the series)? cause i\'ve got some great stories listed in my little green yaoi book of shame that you might wanna check out.
person lady_kail
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This keeps getting better and better!!! I especially liked that kiss of Sanzo\'s near the end. Plus Gojyo is soooooo sweet!
And we can\'t forget, extremely HOT!

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