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by Quirk

person Devious Lil Devil
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hiya Quirk! holding up, ok? hope, those hurricanes didn\'t bother you too much. *waves off the apology about the lateness* no problem. i was just saying to myself the other day to lookout for an update from you and look, there it is. ^__^ *pats your head and gives you cupcakes* you\'re so good.

anyway, lovely work as usual. we actually got quite a bit of dialouge (has no idea if she spelled that right) from the others, sanzo and hakkai, this chappie. so sanzo and hakkai are not a couple. you know that doesn\'t surprise me one bit. that and the fact hakkai initiated it. sanzo, to me, doesn\'t seem to be the type to just come out and invite someone into his bed when he\'s sexually fustrated or stessed. he\'d just become more pissy than usual and more prone to use his paper fan and/or gun. and because of that i can understand why the others were kept in the dark. hmmm. i cant wait to here goku\'s thoughts on this.

but enough about those two, let\'s chat about gojyo. *shakes head* poor gojyo, just admit it. goku is such a cute and sexy little thing. the way you had fight to control himself around him is proof enough. pretty soon, his touch will be the only one you crave, hopefully. and with being said let me state that i\'m very happy with the pairings as they are right now. i admit, when i first started reading this, it was just for the thought of lovely boy smut. *hangs head in shame* but now, i\'m totally in love with this plot and would like to see this through till the end. i\'m pretty sure you already know that i\'m looking foward to the next chappie, so until next time, ja. may the yaoi gods watch over you.

~Devi
person CF
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Been wondering when you\'d be post in the next chapter. Good job on it, as always!

As for your other inquiry, I, for one, would prefer that the couples in this story stay the way they are now. It seems like every Saiyuki fan and her sister writes Sanzo/Goku and Gojyo/Hakkai, so finding fics with other pairings in them is a rare treat (Remember folks, variety is the spice of life!). Also, considering how much time you\'ve taken to develop Gojyo and Goku\'s relationship, I\'d be very disappointed if they ended up with anyone but each other. ...And a foursome? Lemme get back to you on that once my brain stops going \"O_o\".
person Sushi
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait to read more of this. I hope you update again, real soon.
person Shini_tenshi
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been following your story, and I have to say it\'s AWESOME!!! I can\'t wait for the next chapter, so I hope it\'s coming soon^^
person Karie Chaos
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*clings too your leg and whiiiiiiiiines!* More! There is more, right? Right?! *whines and gnaws on her cell phone antenna.* I hope so! This is really REALLY good. I like it, I keep looking back to see if there\'s another chapeter! XD >.> I don\'t do that often.
person lady_kail
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you gonna add more? Because the last thing you wrote was TBC. I and all your fans really, REALLY want more.
So please, give us all more!!!!
person Terry
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great lemon. I love the fact that they start arguing. You\'re doing a fantastic job. I wonder how Sanzo and Hakkai will react to the noise?
person Coolbunny234
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:D
I check back to your story, and BAM two more chapters are up.
*does a very happy dance*
I love you. Have I mentioned that? :D *glomps and molests*

Anyway >.>
Wonderful story once more dearie. I love this plot you have come up with, and will continually check back. *dances some more*
person lady_kail
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading your latest chapter. OH MY GOD! You are absolutely amazing!!
By the way, does it end up being a foursome with Hakkai and Sanzo in the mix? I\'m
just kinda curious as there seems to be quite a bit of unspoken tension there. But whateever
you do, I\'m sure I, and the rest of the readers, will definately enjoy!
person krimson
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I sure wish they would get a Paypal account. I pay everything online or through direct withdrawal, I don\'t even know what cash looks like anymore.

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