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for Teaching Goku

by Quirk

person Ren-chan
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so interesting. I never would have thought of this pairing but It\'s working out well. Your fic is well...um...wery good. (Blush) Oh dear. I really have to push the images of chapter eight out of my head. I have to say that that was one of the BEST yaoi lemons I have ever read. Thank you so much for the entertainment . I think there is a lot I can learn from you . I\'m looking forward to the next chapter! ^ . ~
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*takes a deep breath* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Gojyo finally got some Goku booty! it was beautiful, just beautiful. *bows down before your greatness and sighs happily* man, i cant wait for the next update. oh and yes, it\'s ok if you call me devi. ^______________^
person jarm
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh myyyyyyyyyyyyyy!
person TenshiKaitou
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh. my. gawd. that was so hawt! way hawt! (nose-bled) darn, I think I\'m going to hyperventilate now...^___^;;
person Atocha
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know what you mean. I just love this paring and I am glad they FINALY had sex. I am so happy right now...I think I will get on Diablo and kill something...
person Dragyn_Phyre
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man...I almost died there thinking that was the end....then I saw the \"TBC...\"

*happy thoughts*

~Angel
person M.T
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww... this story makes me all warm and fuzzy inside... ^^
person TenshiKaitou
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
geh?! that\'s kinda unexpected, for Goku to top Gyjo na? a little strange to me, but don\'t worry, I\'ll still be back for the next chapter. So you know your cue, update! Onegai!
person Julie
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really great! I started reading this about a week ago, at idle times at work, and I\'ve got to say that it\'s just wonderfully written. I\'m addicted! I particularly love the tight interconnection you have between the four of them...the unspoken longing that Gojyo feels for Sanzo-- Hakkai\'s kiss for Gojyo-- the hentai in me just loves the sexual tension between the four of them that is gracefully and masterfully implied.
As for the Goku-Gojyo pairing in this... I love it. It\'s sensuous, realistic and addictive to read about. I printed out the last chapter before I left work because I just had to take it home to finish reading it.
You\'ve done a wonderful job and I hope to read more. Thank you for posting it.
Julie
person Julie
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, I forgot to add...
I completely love the Sanzo/Hakkai pairing in this fic. Wonderful job.
Julie

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