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Keep going!! Who knows, maybe your muse\'ll think of an excuse for a four-way...*runs off to staunch nosebleed at the thought of that*

Ohayo, Quirk of the Trade-san? how are you? Good, i hope. anyway, i ish back for more of the beautiful-ness that is \'teaching goku\'. maa maa, things are getting along pretty nicely here, yesh? we began this last chapter with a healthy dose of smut, a smidgen of angst in da middle and finished it up with some cute bonding. one of the first things i noticed about this chapter is that Gojyo is feeling possesive and liking it. i totally enjoy the fact that now when he looks at goku, the thought of goku belonging to only him is there. another thing i\'m loving is how you\'re showing that no relationship starts off beautifully. there\'s gonna be some trials and tribulations for the couple to go through that will, eventually, lead to reinforcing their bond with one another and make them wiser with how to handle their partner\'s needs and wants. oh and before i forget, let me tip my hat at you for mentioning hygiene in preparation for anal-sex. you are one of the few people i\'ve seen do that and i applaud you for it. it just proves to me that you are trying your best to keep this fic as real as possible. and with that , i bid thee farewell. so until next time, ja ne.

\"Hey, look at me when we\'re fighting.\" awwwww. i so wish that i could be a fly on their wall ^____^

OK so whens the next chapter!?! I love this parring so much. And its so hard to find. You do a wonderful job of keeping the characters characteristics in check. There isnt alot of OOC. And I like that. Its hard when you introduce sex between these two but you do a good job. And I still want the next chapter up soon. So good luck and hurry up!!!

Waii! I love this fic! Keep up the good work, kay? I really like how you built up their relation up to this point ^^

sorry for the short review -_-;; It\'s 1:54 am and I\'m tired... But, please keep updating?

You get a cookie! You get two even. First, your knowledge of anatomy is refreshing (I hate it when authors put the prostate on the outside of the body). Also, you mentioned hygiene in regards to anal sex. That automatically makes you rock. Nice writing, also. You\'re very technically sound in your writing. I like that. Keep up the good work!

While I\'m not usually a Goku/Gojyo fan, your story is so well-written that I enjoy it immensely. Your dialogue between Goku and Gojyo always makes me laugh, especially when one considers that lovers don\'t normally speak to one another that way. So, please, hurry with your next chapter!

I love this story. This is what made me a GokuxGojyo shipper over GojyoxHakkai. Haha. My friends now think I\'m crazy. ><
But I can see it...Them as a couple, I mean.
Yay for GokuxGojyo! *Pause.* Yay for Saiyuki!
Your story rocks! *Praises.*

I just have to say that I am loving this fic! :) I\'d never really thought of the Gojyo/Goku pairing before, but you are really making it work. I think my favorite parts of this story are how, no matter their deeper relationship, Goku and Gojyo\'s basic interaction and ways of relation to each other haven\'t really *changed*, just...evolved, I guess, is the best word. I have no idea what you\'re planning to do with this, but I would love to see this pairing stay the same--you\'ve got it working so well, it\'d be a shame to break it up :) Also, in response to your note at the beginning of the latest part, about making a new arc or something...I really don\'t think that\'s necessary. The *type* of lessons are changing, yes, but lessons are still being learned, both by Goku *and* Gojyo. Learning to love and be loved are hard, and they\'re lessons that they both need...and that I think they could teach each other. Just my opinion, of course :)

The spelling and grammar in this fic are wonderful as well. If you have a beta, congratulations to him/her/it, and if not, this is then one of the best examples of self-proofreading I\'ve seen :)

Again, great job, and I hope that you update again *soon*! :)

Yay I was mentioned! LoL. Seriously though this chapter just added to the already excellent flavor of the rest of the story. I\'m sooooo impressed with how well you how each character so true to themselves and still come out with something like this. I bow down and praise you. Seriously. I hope more stories will be forthcoming when you finish this one because I\'m already prepared to read them. I seriously adore this pairing to peices and you just make me feel all warm inside when I read your stuff. So keep up the good work and I can\'t wait for more!!

*stares* *blinks* *dies of happiness* I love you <3 This story is fun. I\'ve always thought the Gojyo/Goku coupling was fun. :3 Especially when Gojyo is teaching Goku about sex. Great story line, and greay over all story so far! I can wait till you write more. *shakes you* wwrrriiiittteee more. I\'ll give you cookies. *holds up a plate of cookies*