AFF Fiction Portal
GroupsMembersexpand_more
person_addRegisterexpand_more

rate_review Reviews

for Teaching Goku

by Quirk

person TenshiKaitou
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
go on updating, you know i luv you! <<^______^>>
person zwei
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gojyo/Goku isn\'t my favorite pairing (that title belongs to Gojyo/Hakkai), but I like what you\'ve done with the characters here. This story seemed to flow almost as naturally as the manga does. Despite the few grammatical errors, I loved it. ^__^ Great job!
person Anon
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wah! How could you stop there? Oh well, it was a decent stopping point. I just hope the next update isn\'t so long in coming. O.o Did I just make a pun!? OMG, I did! FORGIVE MEEEEEEE!
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hullo hullo!! i\'m back for yet another installment of the wonderful-ness that is \"Teaching Goku\" *steeples fingers* yes. i want you to FEEL the floatiness. Mwahahahaha! *shakes head* ok, the random moment of insanity is over. well, lets see what we have here. we have some heart warming one-on-one conversations, the first lover\'s spat and, my personal favorite, the first \'making up\' make out session. sounds like the ingrediants of a great chapter to me. we had the pleasure of seeing just how insightful (and horny: \"It’s just that for a moment, I could see it in my head--- you and Hakkai kissing. It’s hot, you know?\" *snickers*) our little goku is. we enjoy every second goku stumps gojyo while conversing with him. anyway, i loved the conversation the two had earlier in the morning and the \'lover\'s promise\' was a lovely way of ending that convo. (too lazy to type the whole word) this is a learning experience for the both of them with gojyo having the hardest time. i think that he\'ll do just fine after reading this. it\'s just gonnna take some practice and the right partner. and of course he\'s already got that, the right partner, i mean. ^__^ well, i gotta go now, so until next time, ja! *grumbles* damn work.....always taking me away from my fun.
person TaraYuki-Uesugi
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My GODS I love this fic!!! It\'s so great!!! I love how it looks like Gojyo is falling for Goku and I love how their relationship isn\'t taht much different. I\'m glad they still fight and stuff. But I also like Goku\'s honesty. That\'s so Goku. Well yeah......like I said I LOVE this fic. Please update soon.
person Sayge
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! That was good!!! Update again and again and again!!!! DONT STOP!!!! This is fricken great!!! OMG I\'m blushing sooo bad right now! That was just the cutest chapter!!!
person Jamie
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Grins* Awesome>
person NyteDancer
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute, cute, cute!!! i like the contemplative and oddly sharp aspect of Goku, and we all know Gojyo\'s gotta be into more than just women- he\'s just too much of a flirt! although i usually like the Gojyo x Hakkai pairing, this is one fic who\'s updates i look forward to!
person Horny Critic
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!^^It is a pleasure to read this fic! Keep going on, please! Even if it is quite fast but I think some jealousy (contious or direct, please) for the next chapter would be nice. And ... the name of the fic - teaching Goku - nakes the saru a center character, right? I mean, anyone of the bunch can teach him something. It shouldn\'t necessary be Gojyo, right? Well, have fun writing the next part!
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So sorry I didn\'t review the last chapter, though I didn\'t find it too bad. Though, I was surprised that the confession happened that soon.

The current chapter though, was quite excellent. The way you potray Goyjo\'s emotions are always so captivating. And you don\'t write Goku as some little uke boy who can\'t care for himself.

Your interactions are always excellent as well. I feel like I\'m watching the show.

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?