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Every word is a little gem laced together in a glittering jewel of a story. I love your interpretation of these characters. Hakkai and Goku are quite determined to force a bit of self-esteem on Gojyo, but he still isn\'t ready to accept it. I hope you write many more chapters and stories to come. Thanks for sharing this with us.

Great chapter. Can\'t wait to read more smut though. I\'m glad that Hakkai/Goyjo thing isn\'t going forward, i\'m rooting for Goku all the way!

I just wanted to tell you that I love what you\'ve done so far with this. I don\'t find many Goku/Gojyo fics. And I can definately say this is the best I\'ve ever read. I really really really like it and I can\'t wait for you to update with the rest of the lesson plans. :) Keep up the good work. I think your keeping them in character nicely and I love that!

Very good. All too often people neglect the fact that Goku can get very insightful when left a lone for a bit. You presented Goku’s scattered thoughts very well. I could feel the need to speak before he forgot the thought. Good job with that.

I like the Gojyo confusion. His reluctance can be read many different ways and each one seems appropriate. His willingness speaks volumes.

[Is--- is this some weird mother thing?”

At that, crimson eyes narrowed. “Watch it, monkey.”] ---I laughed! This is great. It shows their tried and true relationship as well as an insightful Goku.

[He sighed and answered without hesitation as best he could. “Because I think… about the noises… I’ve heard… and I think about… making Hakkai… make those sounds… and then I think… about him drawing those sounds out of me…” The youth sighed again, heavily. “And I get hot… thinking about it… and I don’t want that when I’m talking to you.”] ---The implications of that are boggling. I’m not sure which direction you are going with this, so I’m trying not to read too much into it. Good job.

The Gojyo/ Hakkai thing – that can be taken a few ways too. The first thing it made me wonder is how does Hakkai really feel about what is going on with Sanzo? Hakkai attitude in this fic smells of obligation – but that might be my angst loving heart speaking.

I really like how you left so much open. I can see where you are setting the stage for some serious angst – I can also see where you are not. Excellent. I look forward to reading more.
Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip*

poor Gyojo. things seemed to get more complicated for him. darn, can\'t wait for the next update! wooohooo~!

aww,i was glomped! *glomps back* i feel so loved! *grins* i\'m back to review yet another lovely installment of one of the best written saiyuki stories i\'ve read so far. so, its finally out in the open and eveyone knows. whoohoo, now, we can see them getting naughty in public places with the lights on! *smirks* anyway, your delivery of the events that occured after gojyo decided to spill the beans (i was shocked when gojyo decided to call him and goku, a couple after goku specifically asked for them to be lovers)was extremely good. i mean you had sanzo\'s act done perfectly, hakkai is normal smiling self (though for a second there, i thought he was gonna kick gojyo\'s ass) gojyo was ...well gojyo and goku had the best reaction out of all of them. when he started babbling about what they had done and sanzo started twitching, i just about died laughing. Oh! and the part with hakkai trying to telling gojyo he deserves better was sweet, too. (i was reading on the bus at the time ^_^) this is definitely one of my fave chapters so far. ahhh, who am i kidding, i like all of the chapters. anyway, looking foward to your next update. keep up the great work! so until next time, ja!

I just wanted to tell you just how much I am enjoying this story. The Saiyuki fandom is so overrun with Sanzo/Goku and Gojyo/Hakkai stories that it gets fustrating looking for good fics with other pairings. And make no mistake, this story is very good; it has an interesting premise, grammar and spelling errors aren\'t bad, and everyone is in character. It\'s not more of the same type of fics that I pass over on a daily basis and for that I thank you. Until next time, I\'ll be looking forward to the next chapter!

THE SUSPENSE...is killing me. So well written--better every chapter and so...deep and complicated, which is life, after all. I know whats going. Hakkai and Sanzo aren\'t in love, but they comfort each other during the rain because they understand each other\'s similar pain best. And now...Hakkai is realizing he messed up and even though he wants Gojyo, he thinks now he\'s lost him. Ack! More!

Ah, the almighty \"everyone loves Hakkai\" effect in action! *laughs* It might ve been an impossible soap opera if he weren\'t so loyal. And Gojyo seems to be destined to go around being dumbfolded XD
Don\'t worry, so far everyone seems to be quite IC. With everyone, I\'m waiting for an update, as usual.

Wow! I would never have thought that pairing would\'ve worked.
But it\'s hot and sweet and I look forward to reading more.