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Aww! Goku is so forceful! Glad you updated and excited to read what happens next!

I\'ll start this review off by saying that I really dislike Gojyo/Goku fics, mostly because I\'m not a Goku fan. So when I say that I am absolutely addicted to your story you will understand how big of a deal it is for me. Not only do I adore the way you write Goku, but your Gojyo...ahh! So good! You do the Saiyuki boys justice! Please please please continue to supply my addiction!

Oh my oh my oh my Goku has gone exclusive! Wow, can Gojyo, though? Ya know, I had NEVER thought of those two as a legitimate pairing, long-standing and the like. Now, though, the way you have written it (with both of their characters very much preserved as well ^^) there is an element of natural progression and then something that is just so right about the situation, especially alongside Sanzo and Hakkai\'s fuckery lol Are Sanzo and Hakkai in a loving relationship in this story, by the way? Maybe you mentioned it, but I just can\'t remember. Hmm... why does Hakkai have to get in everybody\'s business ARGH mothering bastard! Sanzo is moody. A moody Sanzo is a sexy Sanzo. I am rambling now but your story makes me get all giddy! In closing I shall say that the scene with the old lady in the store was frickin hilarious. I can totally envision Gojyo wanting to maintain his stallion status even in a place he may never see again. Boys and their egos, eh? I just want to go on and on and on because this story has a strong hold on me but I can\'t *sigh* Just don\'t get too bogged down in stressful other things and come back to this story! Updates = Stephanie\'s love lol!

Ack the review above was me. I accidentally pressed the return key and ended up anon!

This was excellent. I normally don\'t care so much for this pairing but you make it work so well. ^^; The only thing I noticed was you said Goku was 18, but, umm, isn\'t he like 500? I mean if you count his past and the years he was locked in prison? Not a big thing, just wondering what you planned to do with that.
I loved the last chapter where Goku staked a claim on Gojyo. Gave me the giggles. ^_^ Can\'t wait for more.

This has jumped another level of writing quality with this chapter. The best thing here, in my opinion, was how IN CHARACTER Sanzo was. The bit about him tossing the lighter in front of Gojyo was so realistic, and you had the sense of him being \'not ruled by anger\' while still being as essentially private as he is. Your characterization of Goku is fascinating, he\'s hard to keep real and yet not young.

And Gojyo reacted so completely typically! You keep getting better as a writer, and the story itself, while I\'ve not completely agreed with you on everything, is completely consistent and amazingly believable. You\'re doing a good job showing the progression of emotion, which is something a lot of people miss. That makes this a joy to read and even when I\'m not sure things would happen exactly like you present you give enough compelling rationale that I\'m willing to buy into it.

Hope you find time to write more, and I send wishes of strength your way.

FINISH PLEASE YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sanzo gave his indulgence? How sweet)) Gojyo /waited/ to be claimed, I\'ll bet.

The idea of what will happen when they\'re confronted about this will be interesting to say the least.

Your characterization is masterful as always. You capture both Gojyo and Goku perfectly. They sound like them and act like they would in the given situation.

just update and i\'ll luv you six ways to sunday! heh. wonderful chappie, no explicit mentioned sex but still wonderful as an emotional ride. fabulous!