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I keep liking this more and more, and when I first started reading it, I didn\'t think I would. Congrats on totally changing my mind! I ususally never think about this pairing, but all it took was your story to convince me of how much sense it actually makes. Their personalities really do mesh together rather well, and in spite of (or perhaps because of) the constant repetitive bickering, they\'re always pretty in sync. Awesome fic, and I would love to read more. (Take this as a big compliment; I read a LOT of fics and I hardly EVER comment.) Please continue this as soon as possible. It\'s nice to finally find one where 1) the characters are still IN character, 2) there\'s somewhat of a plot, 3) there are no horrific grammar and spelling errors, and 4) it is well-written and flows nicely.

Please do more!!

That was just... hot. And very well written too. Plus, I like the way they both reciporcate.

I can\'t wait to see how the relationship develops between them.

I just want to say that I really loved your story. I never gave much thought to a Goku/Goyjo pairing before. No one ever made the pairing believable.

I thought you protrayed the characters perfectly. And even though they don\'t love each other, they have a strong bond and an unbreakable trust that really showed in your story. I really liked the tender moments between the two.

So, I just want to say thanks for the great read, you\'re a wonderful writer. I\'ll make sure to keep an eye out for any future stories you may write.

~Mireya

I so love this fic, I hope you update it soon! I\'m dyin to know what happens next!!!!!!!

That is without a doubt the best Gojyo/Goku story I have read. Such rich character development in so few words. I love your approach to both these characters, especially Gojyo. I certainly hope you continue it soon, I\'ll be visiting to look for it.

Sorr...y..cant say a...anything...bu..sy hold..ing klee...ex *MAJOR NOSEBLEED*

The thought of sex and Goku is rather odd, yes--but you\'ve written it better than a lot of people tackle it. For one--you don\'t have him all knowing or anything like that. You kept a lot of his personality with it--and even with Goyjo\'s personality. For a lemon/almost lemon--it was very good for the pairings. :) Goku and Goyjo make a good pairing if there has to be any pairing at all.

oh yeah!! make that sexy kappa teach you some tricks, goku!! then when you\'ve learned all you can, you go after sanzo and hakkai, eventually working your way up for a group orgy!! *smacks herself in attemps to drag her mind out of the gutter........and fails miserably* lol. very nice job! loved how goku turneed the tables at the end. please update soon! i cant wait to read the next chapter.

This was a really nice story. I agree, it\'s hard to write Goku and sex, but you\'ve hit just the right note of curiosity without taking either of them out of character. The decision to set it in Gojyo\'s viewpoint was a good one, and the dialog is completely believeable.

If you write more, I\'ll definately read it.

Nnnniiiicccceeee.....*low whistle* Very good first chapter--I loved every word of it. Update soon, I wanna read about the \'2nd Lesson\'...^_~