rate_review Reviews

hey there i just want to say that i love your story I'm not really a person for angst but your a so sweet moments make up for it and it's really that angsty. anyway i love the couple goku and gojyo and i like the way you write :P

now i'm going to read the next chapie

xxx, blue4summer

woah. I'm so glad I looked this back up again.
DID HAKKAI JUST DO WHAT I THINK HE DID? ::dies::
Oh god, I hope you continue to update. <3

Hello there.

I just dropped in to say that I really, REALLY love this story. It's one of the few fanfictions that I keep a check on and it was/is the story that changed my OTP into Gojyo/Goku. I love everything about this story; the writing, the characterisation and the plot. Please update soon!

But no presure because you give up your own free time to write this I really shouldn't be asking because you've already written twenty-two chapters. I just wanted you to know that there are still people out there who are still reading and are still intrested.

By the way, these are some songs that migh help:
'Accidentally in love' By Counting Crows
'I wish you loved me' By Tynisha Keli
'For Real (piano)' By Saiyuki (anime; you could properly find it on youtube)

Hopes this helps ^^

~Fall

when do you think you'll update this story?

I am not really a Goku/Gojyo fan but this is so hott! I cant wait to see what happens next!
*gives you the cookie jar*

WHAT?! I'm in shock right now....I must admit the smut was nice. I usually love Sanzo/Goku but Goku and Goyjo are super cute. The ending just competely shocked me. I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. It's amazing. I hope you update soon :D

yay! you finally made an update, I can't wait for the next installment!

Hakkai kissed Gojyo? I hope Goku doesn't get a glimpse of that.

oh, my, oh, my, (brain fried) I'vebeenwaitingsolongforthisandnowacliffie! I might die. I love this story. Please, more!

Holy shit. I mean, holy freaking shit. I was going to review at one of the earlier chapters, but everytime the end came I had to go for more. And, now I can't think for it being ssso good. The amount of time you must have spent. . . good lord. Gojyo and Goku, while not a paring I often see and couldn't imagine working, are intricately expressed here. The dialogue is flawless, the detail and descrption of the sex is so well done and so NOT clique or repetitive. There were times while reading I had to stop and remind myself it wasn't the real manga or novel but fanfiction. A delightfully remarkable piece of fiction. The pacve, for the chapters being the length they are, is warranted. I even don't mind the battles not showing up because it puts the emphasis solely where it belongs, with Goku and Gojyo. The added drama of Sanzo maybe harboring feelings for Goku, at least in the past, and Hakkai's budding desire for Gojyo . . . or maybe it's jealousy? It's all flawless. I wonder what's next. Hakkai and Gojyo getting caught by Goku? A battle wherein Goku is injured? Sanzo finally making his move? Please, please don't leave me hanging for long. I'm waiting breathlessly for more.

Can't remember the last time I commented, but I love how the story has evolved since the beginning. The sex is still hot, and the interaction between Goku and Gojyo still tugs at my heart-strings. Love to see where you'll be taking this story next!