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by Quirk

schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you're evil, but it's ok...you'd better update soon though, lol. I'm not sure if we can handle waiting another year for the next chapter;)

~Angel
person bahnona
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for the update (cruel though the ending may be)! Sanzo's not molesting the monkey in the bath, is he? It would figure that Hakkai would provide a distraction (and also want to get his lips on Gojyo!) while Sanzo tried his luck with Goku. Or maybe that's just my twisted mind! Great job of unexpectedly injecting plot. Now it'll be even harder to wait for the next update!
person FallAce
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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No~! Why did you have to end it there!?

After about nine months I was starting to get the sinking feeling that you weren't going to update anymore. But I still came and checked every week anyway. So when I came looking today and found chapter 22 I had to stare for a while and confirm that I was not hallucinating because I wanted the next chapter that much.

Ok. So that was a loooonnnng wait; a very loooonnnng wait. But it was worth it. This chapter was very sweet and they seem to be seeming more and more like a normal couple; up until the last sentence of course. Your writing is still as good and as hot as ever I might add. And I find it fascinating that even though the two are in a relationship you've still managed to keep their characters intact; seeing as this is such a rare pairing.

I'm eager for the next chapter. What will this kiss mean!? So, update soon?

~Fall
person orvida
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ALRIGHTY THAN ARE THEY GOING TO SWITCH PARTNERS OR SOMETHING? ISN'T SANZO FULFILLING HAKKAI'S NEEDS ANYMORE> IS SANZO MISSING HIS PET YET? THESE ARE THE THINGS I NEED TO KNOW I'VE BEEN FOLLOWING THIS STORY FOR A WHILE NOW AND IT JUST GETS BETTER.I LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT POST TO GO UP.
person FallAce
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to bother you but I've just re-read your entire story and it's now at that point where the two might really be in love with each other. I hope that you're not going to discontinue this because it is just a beautiful story and everyone is in perfect character. Even if this is just fanfiction, it's still the best romance that I've ever read.

Please continue.

~Fall
person Aralaiqualasse
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey,

although i love this fic very much...it realy make me sad...

coz the truth is Sanzo like Goku and Hakkai like Gojyo right? And I think Goku and Gojyo also like them but just don't notice it....And Now Goku and Gojyo love each other.....man, ca it get worse than that?

Err...can they just become foursome? hahaha, i think Hakkai and Sanzo is lonely...I know they r sleeping together...but not that kind of lonely...it's like...how to say tis...even u want to b wit ur love one right? So it will be really lonely when the one u love is unreachable...so y dont all just get 4some...but exclude SAnzoGojyo pair...coz strange to see both of them..but hey, i really love Goku to be the ultimate bottom...

hahaha....

update soon

realy love ur fic, just hope u not torture sanzo n hakkai anymore
person Aralaiqualasse
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
just for u to know...I really love GojyoGoku pairing..pls don separate them....

but I also wish for...i mean...SanzoGoku too and GojyoHakkai if u know wat i mean...

SHARE..SHARING...but hehehe Gojyo is getting more and more possesive i know....so pls....

Do u hav any idea so Sanzo and Hakkai will not lonely too?
person orvida
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i love this chapter it was very hott indeed.can't wait for your next post to go up.
person lady_kail
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Worth waiting for. Every chapter is! Even though they're now having mind-blowing sex, you still manage to make it heart-meltingly sweet.

On to the next chapter!
person Alleya
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story to pieces. It warms my heart very much to see you update such a great piece. Keep it up the superb work, you always leave me wanting more. You are a fantastic writer and my inspiration; I hope to write as well as you do someday. Please keep me updated and once again keep it up to the very end.

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