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hiya!! what's cookin'? i finally got the time to up and review so here i am! well, what can i say that i haven't said before besides the fact that i adore this fic and all the time you've put into it. this is the only fic in this fandom that i look foward to seeing updates for. but i'm sure you knew that already. anyway, lovely chappie. they started to have a talk about the pet names (yay) but then gojyo had to go and start feeling up on goku. (double yay) i loved the part when sanzo told gojyo that he was going to spoil goku. i dont know why but that part just made me go a fangirly. that and the blowjob scene *growl* i can't wait to see where they were invited and who invited them. i have an idea but i might be wrong.

oh!! and i see that you checked out "Haru wo Daiteita". good stuff, ne? those are the two bishies i've got hanging on my wall. (i love Katou, the light-brown haired one) and i've also read "Beyond my Touch" (teh cuteness) and "In My King's Harem". i was kinda iffy on the last one because i don't like it when the ukes are super girly looking, but the book is definitely a keeper. i loved all of the stories and despite my dislike of super girly boys the artwork WAS exceptional. i haven't read "our kingdom" yet but it is on my list for the next time i go book shopping. i limit myself to go book shopping once a month. one shopping trip can be up to $100 bucks no problem if i dont make a list and only buy what is on the list. but i'm rambling, which means it's time to wrap things up. always looking foward to your next update. so until next time, ja! ^__^

~Devi

dammnit, i forgot to comment on the extra chapter-thingy! i kinda liked seeing things from someone else's P.O.V. hakkai's response to sanzo's telling him that goku had an orgasm was hilarious. i definitely wouldn't mind reading more of those. but only if it's something that you wanna do. don't kill yourself trying to please your readers, now. there are a lot of pushy reviewers out there. >_< but, yeah, now i'm done with my review. ^__^

best fanfic ever! Please update soon!

I wonder where Sanzo's POV was in the course of Goku and Gojyo's relationship. I'm really glad to see the progression of their relationship. It's really sweet. You found Haru wo Daiteita! I love that manga!!!! It's a really great manga and there is so little fanfiction on it. I do hope that you might someday start writing on that.

Hi! I've been reading this for a while but hadn't reviewed yet. I check for updates every day. I've been enjoying the way that Gojyo and Goku interact and the fact that you've made them sweet without taking away any of the oh-so-Gojyo-and-Goku squabbly interactions. I'm rooting for these two.

I'm really curious to see more of Sanzo's side and to find out about this connection he has to Goku. Where did that come from? When did it start? And to find out a bit more about why he's such a bastard to Gojyo. And did he really JUST go through Gojyo with that kiss to get a taste of Goku, or was Sanzo partly lying when he said he wasn't kissing Gojyo? I'd love to find out in the story.

I love the couples. Of course, if everyone ends up tumbling into the same bed at the same time, I wouldn't have any problem with that either. So I'm going to be happy no matter what happens! :D Thank you so much for writing this story, and I hope you're enjoying it as much as we readers are!

that was great.
are sanzo and goku ganna end up doing anything? and as long as there's another chapter i'll stay alive just cause right now my life is kickin me in the face and i need a good smile. keep up the good work!!111

Sometimes it's hard for me to imagine Goku with anyone, but this just works! Keep it up. And I LOVED reading from Sanzo's pov, and I can't wait to get more of THAT either. Thanks for being so damn cool!

Whoa, very hot chapter! Also love the addition of Sanzo's POV from the first chapter. Was that a one-shot or will there be more? Please update soon.

I LIKE that other point of view. Opens up soooo many new vista. (big, cheesy grin)

I'd like to do a real in-depth review of your work, but all I can say, is I LOVE IT! and I'm always checking for an updates.
Here's to waiting for the next instalment. Plus, thank you in advance for all your updates.

This fic is simply amazing.I love it. I never knew Goku/Gojyo could be this good, it's surprisingly refreshing, from the more obvious and common Goku/Sanzo and Hakkai/Gojyo...but Sanzo and Hakkai seem to be in love with the other two, which makes it even better!!At first I wanted Gojyo and Goku to play around but end up with Hakkai and Sanzo respectively. But now I'm on Gojyo's side!!I don't want them to EVER be apart!!But jealousy is so much fun...and Gojyo being insecure is just too cute^^. Goku is the cutest of them all, but that was a given. Oh, and one thing I'm very impressed with, you depict the relationship surprinsingly real and convincing.They're not sappy, but they're romantic in their own way, and what a realistic way it is. I hope you're having fun writing this, cause I'm sure having it while reading!!
Oh, and this last chapter(really chapter one from Sanzo's p.o.v)was veeeery good, I'd be amazing if you retold events from his perspective!!(the absurd: "Goku just had an orgasm" made me laugh so hard my deaf granma heard it from downstairs-I was quite surprised. Seriously, very good)

Sorry if grammar was bad, I live in Spain, so my english is school's teaching and a bit of talking once in a while.