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for Captive of the Dark

by kawaiikitsunethief

person krad
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!This is so awesome!It had me on edge the hole time.PLEASE UPDATE!!^_^
person WiccanVampire
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHY DID YOU STOP WRITING!? I loved the first chapter and the story was so well written too. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE start writing this story again even though it has been more than a year since you posted the chapter.
person Faultless Requiem
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's hard to believe this is your first DNAngel fic. I love the dialouge between Krad and Sato. When someone asked my "Why?" today (and right now I completely forget the context), I was incredibly tempted to smirk and randomly say, "Today's November 11th." Of course, today is actually November 14th, but...

So, I suppose the entire purpose of this review was to say: Good job, keep up the good work, and update as soon as you can.

~Faultless
person stella
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nooooo you must update this is so good evey ones in character if i dont know what happens i will die! x_x come on!!! pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee pleaseeeeeeeee ::crys:: PLEASEEEEEE! id like it very much! ^_^
person sinsoftime
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Don't end it there! More! More! More! Please?!?!?!?
person Arsinen
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Anou....um when are you going to update? *twiddles with fingers* You know because I hope you update this awesome fic soon. Maybe please for me...for me? You're probably like...yeah right....Well anyways I love this hehe like how you described the now older Daisuke pretty sexy same with Satoshi. Well update soon please please. I promise not to murder the world if you do. *tries to hide all the tnt and tanks in her closet* bye bye.
person Aini
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! DON\'T END IT THERE!!!!! please please please please please please please pretty please continue!!!! it\'s relly good!!! i love it don\'t stop please continue!!!
person Going Golda
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG!!!! You have to write more!! please....;_; You make me cry because of this is torture!!! You are a great writter and this has DEFINITE potental! Please oh please write more. Otherwise I\'ll sick my muses on you. And you won\'t like my muses when they\'re angry!
person Nina
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finnnnnish PLEASE!!! ;_;..Whaaaaaa!!!
person Takayu
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great, but so far it seems more like \'captive of the light\'.

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